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When Pinkie Pie has lost all hope, help arrives in the strangest of forms. One-shot starring Pinkie Pie and Discord.

*Cover image by nikkuwalkanov*

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It's beautiful. Take my stars.

I would say "Me Gusta", but I think this story deserves more.

MEZA LIKAAAH EET

Five stars, you glorious bastard.

wow, discord chages his tactic lol :pinkiegasp: but it saved pinky, awsome :pinkiehappy:

5 stars for you

Ketchup you have my 5. It has always been within him. When Luna "saved" him, it had not really been that hard. He just needed to want her help.

That was the... second best written story I've ever read:pinkiesad2:

That deserves 5 stars:pinkiehappy:

Thanks for the kind words guys it really means a lot. :twilightsmile:

I'm amazed that so many people enjoyed this, both here and on FF because it wasn't meant to be an actual story, just dialogue for another fic that I plan to write. I also wanted the reader to draw up a lot of the conclusions for themselves such as who was the real person behind this (Discord, Celestia, Luna, Twilight etc) as well as provide a view on chaos that I doubt anyone would look at.

It's an honour I was able to touch so many people with this. I only hope I can continue this level of writing :twilightblush:

This story made me smile both on the inside and outside. This is Heartwarming. It doesn't shove sadness down your throat just to, a few lines later, vomit happiness.
Truth be told, though; it is a little short and abrupt. We never got any 'backstory' as to why Pinkie is like this (which is vastly considered fanon). Discord's release being not-so-subtly hinted at was another good thing. Doesn't reveal much but doesn't leave us in the dark.
You win bonus points for your originality. Whilst -- as I stated -- Gloomy Pie is a cliché'd premise, you built the plot cleverly on top of that weak, frail base, making it all sturdy.

I've always sort of thought like this Discord; the world isn't white or black, it is gray. But that last sentence... I've never thought about it that way.

Your fanfic managed to make me do something that most fanfics aren't able to; excuse me, I have some thinking to do.

[EDIT]: I love spiders.

350199 I'm just happy you didn't track it. :raritywink:

Nobody loves spiders. Get help.

Discord....Is.....Amazing! And as he claimed always handsome.:pinkiesad2:

What is life without a little chaos? My own life is plagued by organised chaos. I thrive by chaos. I'm glad to see that chaos has helped sompony, fictional or not. In the realm of chaos, who knows what's fictional or not? For all we know, we are all characters of a story...
Chaos. Can't live with it. Can't live without it.
Life is chaos.
Death is chaos.
Chaos is everything and nothing.
Chaos is confusion.
I'm sure I have confused many people by writing this.
It's late and I'm in the mood for chaos.

This thing STILL has only 37 likes?! BLASPHEMY!

THIS is how you do a sad fic. You managed to fill Pinkie with a sense of desperation, tiredness, and hopelessness while still having her be PINKIE. It wasn't like Pinkie was just "sad to be sad", no, I felt BAD for her in this story. What makes it even more impressive is that we don't even know WHY Pinkie was going to "do the deed" in the first place, yet I felt for her all the same. Perhaps it was best that you left this up for speculation---what WOULD cause Pinkie to be pushed into doing something like this anyway?

Then there's Discord. My goodness, I loved Discord. If there was a version of "Good Discord" I liked more than the show's take, its this version. Though it doesn't explicitly say what reformed him (or who freed him, though I'm guessing Celestia did that in this story at least), those details don't really matter in this context. Discord was still being himself while also being helpful in his own way. This is probably my favorite fan fic involving him; he made me smile throughout the whole thing.

Great job with this; I can't believe it took me so long to review this after reading this, like, ten million times for the past two years, maybe? Even before I joined FimFic, actually. :rainbowlaugh: 10/10, A+, Gold Star, all that jazz. Hope to read more from you!

this is even better after season four! this hit so many emotional strings for me, it was lovely. you managed to make discord compassionate yet wholly in character. pinkie was believably depressed and suicidal without being woobified or treated as a joke. it wasnt angst just for angst's sake. it was heartfelt and beautiful

This was a pretty heavy story I got to say and it's really awesome to see Discord helping in his own way but it also really helped out Pinkie Pie out of the depression she just needed to open up to her friends and family knowing that she will never be alone depression is a very difficult situation but it still can be helped they just need to talk about it killing yourself is never the answer it will just leave more pain and suffering not just only for you but the friends and family will suffer as well I got to say this was pretty good keep up the good work

I can't believe he just dropped this absolute gem of a story and disappeared. Also can't believe it has so few likes.

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