>Hide in the nearby bushes and make out.
“Well, where are we going, Diamond Tiara?” Apple Bloom asks as I lead her towards the bushes.
“Just hurry up, Apple Bloom!” Seriously, you need to lighten up! Looks like nopony’s looking. I quickly jump into the bushes and urge Apple Bloom to do the same.
“What are we doing hiding here?” Oh Apple Bloom, you are so ignorant.
“We’re not hiding, Apple Bloom,” I tell her as I lay on my back. “We’re just gonna have a little bit of fun.”
“F-fun?” Yes, Apple Bloom, fun. As in we’re going to make out. As in we’re going to hold each other lovingly. As in if you don’t get on top of me right now I’m going to get up and make you get on me!
“Come on, Apple Bloom! You know you want to.” And I know it too, if that blush is any indication.
“W-well, ah guess we could have… ‘fun’...but just fer a little bit!” YES! I DID IT! I can barely contain myself as Apple Bloom struts towards me with that adorable blush of hers! She carefully climbs on top of me, leaning down and-
“Apple Bloom! Diamond Tiara! Where are you two?!” OH COME ON!
“That’s mah sister! We gotta go!” No! Don’t leave me!
“Come on, Apple Bloom. She won’t find us!” You should just worry about staying with me! I know for a fact you want to kiss my lips; who doesn’t?
“It doesn’t matter, Diamond Tiara. Mah sister’s calling fer us.” Grr, stupid Applejack! She is going to make a terrible sister-in-law! “Listen, we can make out later… Wow, never knew ah’d ever say that.” Yeah, thinking it over that is kind of a weird thing for you to say.
“Alright, fine!” I throw her off of me and get up. “But you are so buying me a parfait later if you want any of this!” I tell her as I wag my tail in front of her.
“...Ah don’t get it.”
...Note to self: Have Apple Bloom play some eroge, THEN tempt her with sexy tail wagging.
“Whatever, let’s just go!”
“What ah do now?” Apple Bloom whines as she follows me. “Listen, Ah’ll make it up to you, promise.” Hmph. “Come on,” Apple Bloom says as she throws her hoof over my shoulder. “Gimme a smile.” I don’t want to. “Will it make you feel better if ah told you why I like you?”
“I already know why you like me.”
“Really?” Apple Bloom asks with a raised eyebrow. Not as cute as her blush, but still cute. “Alright, ah’ll bite. Why do ah like you?”
“It’s so obvious: it’s because I’m Diamond Dazzle Tiara!” Only fools who have no taste hate Diamond Dazzle Tiara.
“That’s...sure, lets go with that.” Ha! Called it. “Lets just hurry up and find mah sister.” Alright, alright, I get it! You’re embarrassed. Can’t blame you, after all, you have the most beautiful filly in school pining for your affection.
“You know, Apple Bloom,” I whisper as I stop her from leaving the bushes, “I’m sure your sister can wait just a few more seconds.”
“Why does she need to wait for just a few sec-” I cut her off with a quick kiss to her lips. Her tender, sweet lips that taste just like apple jam...though they’re a bit dry I should give her some chap stick. With how dry her lips are, I might accidently cut my lips.
“Apple Bloom, you need to start using chap stick,” I tell her after pulling away.
“Uh...sorry?” That’s right, you better apologize! “Anyways, we done? Or do you want another?” she asks me with a smile. Oh, do you want another kiss?
“Well, I suppose we could…” I whisper as I lean towards Apple Bloom, our lips barely touching, “...find Applejack. She must be worried sick!” I reply as I turned away and leaped out of the bushes.
“...That’s not funny.” I hear Apple Bloom grumble behind me.
“It’s not my fault your sister’s calling. I mean, you’re not going to ignore her, are you?” Well? What will you do, Apple Bloom? Make out with me? Or talk to your sister who’s just going to give you more work? I think the answer is obvious.
“....Get in the bushes.”
Well, I guess that answers that question!
True End
Yay! Kissing!
Only Sweetie left.
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Gonna try to write the first part tonight.
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Apple Bloom may be a little young for eroge, but DT may as well corrupt everyone.
3618358 It is an Otaku's duty to share their fandom to the unenlightened.
Great story so far bro!
Oh brother..
Hate to break it to you "Princess" but if it wasn't for my RPs as Silver Spoon I would STILL be hating your guts.
Basically as Silver Spoon, I came to love and respect DT as much as she would. But there really is NO winners in this game, accept maybe Silver Spoon because she knew going in, that DT was a coniving, selfish, spoiled, manipulative little bitch.
So, I just read through all of this. And, while occasionally funny, it was overall lackluster. Not majorly engaging. Sorry to be a downer...
BTWs, SSxDT is true end.
3618339 Is she the only one left? IS SHE?!?!?
The harem ending is the one and only true ending, these other true endings are the endings of second rate dating sim wannabes. All hail the harem ending
3618353 yay!
3618511 This is why non-believers hate other fandoms :\
THEY DON'T WANT TO BE ENLIGHTENED D:
Well, it's been a couple weeks. I sure hope you continue this!
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Thanks for all the great comments, seriously, nothing strokes the ego like a good bit of praise !
This story is kinda hard for me to write, with the whole first person thing. I wanted it to seem like all these things were happening at that very instant, and I'm not quite sure if that's actually a good way to write it. Thankfully ppl like it so I don't think I'll change the style. Plus I don't feel like rewriting the whole thing .
As for "How to be a Mother", I'll write another chapter if I can think of a good idea. Finding a idea that actually inspires me is surprisingly hard...could be due to my extreme laziness.
If you enjoy DT stories, you should try looking at our group, The Diamond Cutters, we have a bunch of well written DT stories by the likes of Mudpony, Yukito, and MagerBlutooth just to name a few. Again, thanks for reading my stories, and hope you have a good one.
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Oops, didn't address this question, sorry. Don't worry, I have a bit of Sweetie's story written. Sadly, it's probably gonna be the shortest route, but I'm trying to make it good still. Basically, it's gonna be short and sweet, just like Sweetie Belle !
...That joke wasn't funny
3726019 Well, to be perfectly honest, I despise first person stories and it's really unsettling to read (at least for me). However, I ended up reading this entire thing, so what does that say? I think it says enough about how you enticed me to keep going with its goofy, intriguing, cute, interesting plot. So, yeah, if you do manage to continue it eventually, definitely stay with what's been working.
I was looking on Deviantart at all the Diamond Cutter stuff, and I asked to join. Basically went ignored thus far, but the point is I do love Diamond Tiara a lot and I am always looking for new stories with her. Mostly ones that are romantic involving her and the Crusaders, since I'm a sucker for sweet, romantic things, but so long as the stories don't make her into a horrible monster and/or don't just insult or abuse her, it's a good story to me.
And you're welcome. Your stories aren't perfect (but, to be fair, no one is perfect), but they are adorable, different, cute, and very captivating to read and enjoy. And that's what counts. So, you deserve the praise~
damn applebloom sure was easy to get, scootalo at least hold it up for a month
Let's ses here Applebloom gets a
4/5.
Tho boping was satisfying.
Lol