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Sorry saw the title and had flashbacks to Eden of the East.
NOW TO READ!
To put it simply, this needs some work. While the premise is quite adequate and the majority of the writing is fairly devoid of serious grammatical issues, there needs to be some effort put in to make this a little more readable. Other than that, I think I'll give this an upvote and fav, because while not perfect, this is certainly worth reading.
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I hope it was a good flashback at least, thanks for the comment, I hope you enjoy the read.
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Thank you for the upvote, fave and comment, I greatly appreciate it and i'm glad you found it was worth reading.
I really want to improve my writing skills so I was wondering what you think needs changing to make it more readable?
This was good fun! I really liked seeing how all of the nobles are dealing with Administrative Professionals' Day. I love that Blueblood actually got all of his work out of the way ahead of time so he could spend the day baking with Pinkie.
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Thanks i'm glad you enjoyed it! I liked the idea for BB as well, Fizzy suggested it and it makes sense given his talent, so long as he keeps his eye on the prize he'll be fine.
Man, Blueblood knows how to spend a day when everyone is away....Kinda jealous.
2679410 Yes... 'baking'...
This is very fun, seeing how all the bosses deal without their assistants.
However, GET OUT OF MY HEAD!!
I had a fairly similar idea for the upcoming holiday challenge with Pokey going on holiday for a week and Trixie having to deal with her job, I'm also currently writing a Blueblood / Pinkie romance which I can probably make fit into this.
On the plus side for my ego
You referenced my story, thank you, thank you, thank you!
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The boy keeps his eye's on the prize so to speak, delicious strawberry cake, Thanks for the comment.
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Yep, completely innocent, nothing more wholesome than baking going on here.
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Thanks I really appreciate that!
Sorry for being in your head, i'll ensure to recall the telepathic spies I have hanging about.
2680372 You just can't tell with Pinkie Pie... she'll chatter her way through what sounds like five minutes of baking-themed sexual innuendo, and then finish with, "And then, after that, maybe we could have sex?" so Blueblood ends up not sure whether the innuendo was actually innuendo or she was actually talking about baking...
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How have your spy's penetrated my tin foil hat?
Wait a minute this isn't tin foil, its paper painted silver!
VAAAAAAZZZZZZZZAAAAAAAKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!
[youtube=http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=wRnSnfiUI54#t=17s]
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Mquahahaha!
The second stage of my master plan is complete!
I hate holidays like that too.
....my brain! What did you to do it?
I find Blueblood's relationship with Pinkie utterly hilarious.
And thanks for reminding me why I detest Puissance so much.
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It's a horrid feeling
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I don't know!
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Thanks, i'm glad you enjoyed it, and I guess i'm glad for Puissance as well, though I doubt she'd be too happy about it
continue proving his mettle
I simply couldn't bear the thought
Fun story
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Thanks for the compliment and corrections! I'd better go fix those now.
Poor Trixie, she just can't win, main character or not she is a constant butt monkey.
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Thank you for the comment.
I know, she really can get it rough. Normally I don't care for treating her as such, but this opportunity just couldn't be missed.
So Greengrass and Blueblood finished their paperwork ahead of time, Trixie Puisance and Fisher are slaving away over it and Night Light is working on it without problem. Blueblood now has Pinkie to help entertain himself no matter if it be baking or otherwise, things may just be a game for her, but she is far from stupid, proven in that she can remember everypony's bithdays and probably the amounts of ingreidents for baking something and she can definitly be sly if need be. I'd imagine so anyway.
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No problem, she does have to do sme work on her own after all, we can't very well lwet her get lazy now can we?
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That's Pinkie for you, you can never tell if she is serious or not.
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That pretty much sums it up, and one can never tell what Pinkie is thinking, but she definitely has more to her than she projects.
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Thanks for all the comments, I really appreciate it.
Most definitely not.
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The only one who can understand how Pinkie thinks would be Bubble Berry, her rule 63 counterpart, then again, maybe not completly, gender differences and all leading to possibly small deviations in their universes, but he's probably the closest one who can understand her mindset. Then again, her randomness makes her an enjoyable character, just don't make her mad, she rarely gets mad, but if she does, one can only imagine...
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I don't know, she and Maud also seem to be able to understand each other perfectly, both being Cloudcuckoolanders and all. But yeah, Bubble Berry would also be able to match up with her pretty well I imagine.
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True, Maud may be completly deadpan to contrast to Pinkie's boundless energy, she may understand more or less how Pinkie thinks due to being family and all, the contrast is amusing.
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Yeah, it's pretty enjoyable to see them side by side. Personally I figured she got Pinkie because she's mroe or less as weird just in a more quiet manner and more focused on rocks than party's... I kinda want to see the other two sisters now, having all four in a room would probably be amazing.
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Eeyup.
