Depressio

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Depressio

A strange, grey pony is lurking in the Everfree Forest. Why is it there, and more importantly, why is it only grey?

(Thanks to Purple Thunder for the description idea! I've never been any good at descriptions of my stories <_< )

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The Thing in the Forest · 13th Feb 2012 · 1,991 words
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The Meeting · 13th Feb 2012 · 1,860 words
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Leaving the Forest · 27th Feb 2012 · 832 words
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Her Story · 27th Feb 2012 · 1,288 words
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Purple Thunder

Purple Thunder #1 · Feb 26th, 2012 · · · The Meeting ·

You should write a description, this is a really good story, but it doesn't get viewed much, I'm guessing that because it doesn't have a description. Can't wait for next chapter!

Fernin

Fernin #2 · Feb 26th, 2012 · · · The Meeting ·

Seems interesting so far. Purple Thunder is right though; would benefit from a description.

RosaryOmen

RosaryOmen #3 · Feb 27th, 2012 · · · The Meeting ·

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Yeah, I really need to write one. I've never been too good at describing my own stories. I'll work on it though.

Purple Thunder

Purple Thunder #4 · Feb 27th, 2012 · · · Leaving the Forest ·

265374 Ooh, is your profile pic Depressio? Very nice. A description could be:

Either #1:
Fluttershy spots a strange gray pony in the forest while looking for a kitten that she's looking after. She runs back to Ponyville and gathers her friends to go find the pony.

OR #2:
A strange, grey pony is lurking in the Everfree Forest. Why is it there, and more importantly, why is it only grey?

You can write paragraphs if you want! These are just some ideas.

RosaryOmen