I'm a random guy that claims to know how to write. I'm constantly being proven wrong.
With her formal coronation complete, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna have invited Princess Twilight Sparkle to the capital to undergo formal instruction how to rule. It is a glorious event, fit to fill history tomes for all time. They would spend their time with long royal court sessions, longer book studies, and all other manners of royal training.
Then Pinkie tagged along.
Special thanks to Admiral Hoofsome, Kitsunehero, and Phaoray for editing this sucker.
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This, is pure gold.
Next chapter!
Pairing Celly and Pinkie is something I have never seen before and I would LOVE to see how they function together.
Your opening chapter here, did a fantastic job in setting everything up.
Overly energetic Pinkie, even for her standards? Check!
Unusually open and spontaneous Celly? Check!
Twilight and Luna out of the way? Check!
Celly being over-confident? Check!
This is going to be great
Sweet another Celestia/Pinkie story. Those are always interesting especially when they try to understand each other. I am going to keep an eye on this.
Celly is REALLY going to be feeling her age. It's going to be epic!
I can't WAIT for the next chapter! This is going to freaking brilliant, I can already tell, so far so good.
Keep up the good work, I eagerly await the next chapter!
I will be tracking this.
Edit: I am now tracking this.
Edit 2: I have tracked this.
Those who have commented on this fic at this point, you are the best kind of people.
5629890 Aw! You're pure gold! Hope that you stick with this sucker!
5630694 You better! You follow me for a reason, ya shit! Oh, and why do I never see you on skype?
5631863 I hope it is. Either that, or I'll crash and burn.
5634712 WELL YOU BETTER LEARN HOW TO WAIT, SON!
5634764 Good.
Edit: Still Good.
Edit 2: Still very good.
I'm watching this carefully.
Watching... not reading until it's done. I've been burned too many times.
But... I dare to dream this may be completed one day. Godspeed brave author, from an enthusiastic Pinkie Pie fan.
Brilliant
5637947 You'll be happy to know that, quite literally, I have the entire thing written already. Some cleanup to do on the ending and minor edits to make throughout, but it's already entirely written. Besides, if you look at my story history, I've completed everything I've started! NO WORRIES!!
5638125 No you are!
5637085
lol Simply put I am rarely on Skype unless somebody prompts me to be on Skype. Heck the only reason why I have it in the first place was so I could have face to face conversations with my wife when we were in different states for about a year.
Very promising start, I shall look forward to the contination.
I broke my rule and read the first chapter. So far, so good. I do believe Celestia might be biting off more than she can chew... but maybe that's exactly what she wants.
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That makes me excited!
I am certainly looking forward to more!
Just realized I never replied to a few people that came late. Apologies for that.
5642155 Good! You better! Or else!
5642215
When concerning Pinkie, that tends to be a running theme throughout any and all canon and fandom.
5661794 Yeah. I decided that instead of ending up in a situation where life punts me for fifty yards and I can't write much, I decided to go this route. And I'm excited you're excited! Let's be excited together!
Not really sure but you might be overdoing it a little bit with Pinkie.
Aside from that, I think you're doing a good job in getting Celly warmed up with Pinkie.
Something seems to be missing here.
There's a point when they're talking about the secret rooms when you skip one of Celestia's lines. You should probably check that.
5671212 5671244 Curse you import from gdocs! I even went over the story once and I still missed this import fail!
Anyway, this was the missing line.
“Pinkie Pie, have you ever known my student to pass up a good book to go do anything that might be considered exciting?”
For a second I thought you might be implying something with the itchy knee (really close to pinchy which is of course danger) but I guess not this time.
Wow the dungeon of lame huh?
Still, though it had Pinkie so
5670724 Overdoing it in what way? This isn't me saying you're wrong, I just want to know so I can get better
5672242 Nah, I'm keeping this story free of any weird memes... I think. Either that or I'm not. Not sure which.
5672512 It wasn't a dungeon! It was an old section of the castle.
Of course, you getting that impression meant I done goofed.
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I just think Pinkie is too hyperactive, even for her.
Sure she's random and very fast at times. But that's just it. She is quick at times not all the time.
Also I think she could have been a little bit more respectful towards Celly. Not much, but a little bit.
But that's just my personally preferred balance for her behaviour.
Great chapter. More please!
Typical Pinkie
getting the princess drunk 
Sounds like Soho. Or Bourbon Street.
It seems Pinkie knows how to push all the buttons and poor Celestia can't seem to decide if Pinkie's flirting is on purpose or incidental.
Why do I get the feeling that drink is Pinkie's take on the Pan Galactic Gargle Blaster. Also I hope I'm wrong.
I just realized I never replied to these. Huh.
5685595 Nope. Cancelling the story.
5685826 I see her as that friend that wants all the ponies to get drunk, regardless of the appropriateness of the situation.
5687205 They are indeed naked, so I guess you are definitely right in that case.
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5687803 100% serious: pure coincidence. I had to look up what that was. Kinda eerie on how similar they are...
5687632 I am yet to read this.. (I sometimes skip to comments to get a idea about the fix more the than desc) But knowing Pinkie Pie, how she puts cake batter in the cannon and confetti in the oven, I'd say she's just being typical Pinkie Pie and the flirting is going to be Pinkie's randomness that ended up being flirty. Don't we just love Pinkie's randomness?
Ooh, seems like somepony's got a painful past love experience. Awesome job, keep up the good work
5717493 Are you really going to cancel it?
That would be a real shame. The story is brilliant.
I would have never thought that Celly and Pinkie could actually work, but you get it to work.
That is amazing.
Can't you at least make one last chapter to wrap it all up?
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Pinkie digs giant robots
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Sometimes I feel like the little few words I put in a header are a waste. Anyway, time to actually type something important.
5717716 Psh, you read it wrong! Celestia is just constipated
. Anyway, thanks for the praise!
5718117 Nope. I refuse to complete this completed story. You know what? It's all because of you that I decided to cancel it. That's right. It's your fault. How dare you.
5718506 i.imgur.com/XoYgHyi.jpg
5719529 I'm sure a constipation joke here would be perfect, but I'm too classy for that sort of thing.
Because I used the author's note above, here's the unofficial one.
nice chapter. I think you succeeded/will succeed in making this story round and giving it a smooth ending.
Thx
A little OOC for Luna to use such strong language. But just a tad.
I wholeheartedly agree, support, condone and all other words that mean approve of this ship.
And you did a marvelous job! Bravo!
This story was excellent thanks for posting the ending.
Not sure how you made this work but you did.
I agree with ↑ them. This Was Worth Reading™.
This was a sweet and funny story
This was awesome have a Favorite! 😊