Pinkie Pie. Father of Fighting Fever, one of the greatest Bullfighters in history. He has died from the hooves of the mighty la furia negro. The Black Fury. Can Pinkie avenge her beloved fathers death? Or will she die by the great beast that has bested many?
A short that I came up with. I got the idea from this song.
Hope you like it!
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Hey! VX here.
I do these shorts for you're entertainment. If you see any errors or plotholes then don't be afraid to point them out! Have fun!
-VX
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Hope you enjoyed my story!
Quite an interesting fic if I do say so myself. There are very few, if any, grammatical errors. I must say I like it.
Although I have to ask, do you actually speak Spanish? I don't mean to offend but there are a few issues in that department involving the phrases you used.
I believe "La Furia Negra" would be more grammatically correct, as "furia" is a female noun!
(Spanish is weird, I know.)
that is the coolest cover image ever!
Glad to see that you finally got it out there.
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I couldn't of done it with ought you!
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No, I don't. I knew I got some of the phrases wrong
2691924 Don't listen to him, there are plenty of grammatical errors... yes even in your description.
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Mind telling me what they are so I can maybe... fix them?