The Real Steel
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Not bad at all.
2640177 Well thank you kindly.
i kinda want to know how he found out cadance was cheating on him and her reasoning behind it. There is like so amny ways he could have found out. Did he walk in on her? Did he hear a rumor? Did cadance just tell him that she didn't love him anymore? .I would also love to knwo twilights reation to the knowledge of cadance.
Rarity x Shining Armor?
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RarArmor?!
2640939 It's a good question and my memory is hazy, unless I deleted it Shining Armor had a flashback when he was asleep where he opened the door to his room in The Crystal Empire where it can only be assumed he saw Cadance cheating on him.
2643666 Hahahahaha, that picture gave me the giggles. Have a Dashie
And I have no idea what that ship would be called. Armity, RarArmor, RarIng. Someone will find one that works.
3...2...1 FEATURED! This. Is. Incredible. Easily the best clopfic i have ever read. You REALLY need to make this into an actual multi-chapter clopfic. This is easily just as good, if not, better than romance reports.
2644307 O-o Uh................
Wow, I am glad to hear you enjoyed it. I may make this a multi-chapter story. I am just a little hesitant to do it before I do some more oneshots, I have a few other stories but when I try to do multi-chapters I always hit a roadblock. I have some ideas though and I am not sure if this is incomplete or not yet, I'll give it a bit, write some other one shots in the meantime.
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I hope you do! This is all around very well written, and if you do it right, will be a very popular multi-chapter fic. You got a great story, unique pairing, and lots of good drama to go along with it. You did a damn fine job!
2644388 Well damn, I appreciate the compliments Dashie. I have personally never seen Rarity and Shining Armor before which doesn't make sense to me, they seem like a good pair to me. I may turn this into a Romantic Clop, the following chapters (If there are any) dedicated to the fallout of their actions.
2644364 I do agree a multi-chapter would be good. 1 chapter a flashback wehre he finds out cadance is cheating on him. 1 where I guess might not be a clop chapter or could have it but has everyone else find out cadance cheated on him and then 1 where rarity and shining really go at it.
2645369 If I do multiple chapters I have the basis for the story already. However, I have not yet decided what I want to do besides work on my newest one shot. Still, I am glad to see this was received warmly and as a result of that might just continue it
I have been holding myself from reading stories for the longest of times now Steel, but lately, I have been on a reading spree. This is one of them and let me tell you, I loved it!
The build up was just superb and sens making in my eyes but the pay off, that was even greater!
A very, very good story you have managed to write down here darling.
2804835 Well, you know your opinion is valued by me. I am glad to hear you liked it and I know I promised some stories but I got lazy, unmotivated and rather defeated in writing rather quickly. So, my apologies on that. My writing is sporadic and often lazy
2842051 I would have made a full out review of the story if I wasn't as lazy as I was at the time... Oh well, maybe another time. Darling, darling, darling. The process of writing is a delicate one, one that, with your own words, is completely true. But from time to time, you just have to put on some music that fits with the story, sit behind your computer and just let the characters do the actions in your head.
See it as a movie that plays in your head and her hooves type them out on paper. it may be hard, but it is doable, trust me on that one.
And never forget Steel, writing is time consuming.
Hm. I like this ship. I like this story.
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2862636 Heh thanks for the love and dat thumbs up Lyra. She needs to respect the 4th wall
I like this.
2950027 Well I am glad you do :)
Not the best clop I've ever read, but not the worst.
Rarity-Shining Armor is one of those ships there simply isn't enough of
moar plz?
3122843 Everything motivational wise kinda died a while back man, I am not sure if there will be any more coming or when it will be coming if so.
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Great story, I really loved it. That being said, there's couple of minor thing you may want to edit.
That should be "explode".
And those two should be spaced apart.
If this is a one-shot, why is it labelled as "Incomplete"?
This was an enjoyable story would love to see more of this
Odd pairing, but I love it, they make a cute pairing. Very well written, simple plot, very well narrated, excellent clopfic. I really like it.
Greetings