• Member Since 4th May, 2013
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Fluffy Fraggle


Pinkie's sister has fallen into a coma after an encounter with a deadly flower in the middle of the Everfree. Desperate to save her, Pinkie has run off into the Everfree alone to find the cure, leaving Twilight to wonder if the party pony will be safe on her own. Unwilling to lose one of her closest friends, Twilight decides to venture into the forest as well to find her friend, before its too late.

A TwiPie story from Twilight's POV.

Special Thanks to my Editors!


Cover art by KatiraMoon

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 10 )

I cannot loss her!

Should be lose I would assume. Will read later tho


Thanks for spotting that! :pinkiehappy:

Like so many authors have old me:facehoof: the description is the most important part!:raritystarry: great book, great grammer and speling, perfect cover art, no pony will read it if the description isn't good. So why am I telling you this? Because even though your description is interesting its confusing.:rainbowhuh: so if you really want people to read it:twilightblush:work on your description! Without the short description it really makes no sense.

I'm not trying o be mean or anything like that! Promise. I just wanted to point that out to be helpful and get more likes for your story. Twipie is one of my favorite mane six mane six pairings. (But nothing tops Appledash!!!!) so I want to help. Not that you don't have enough likes. More readers and even mor likes! :pinkiehappy::heart::twilightsmile:

this story is total awesomeness


Thank you! In my opinion it still has some tweaking that needs to be done. :pinkiehappy:

So more when?

Comment posted by HyperBlossom7 deleted Jan 15th, 2014


Someone put this in the wrong shipping group of Applejack x Pinkie Pie. You might want to see about getting that corrected to target the audience for which it is intended.

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