Twilight Sparkle and Applejack, after an earthquake, escape to nowhere, and they meet a strange pony named Screwball. The pony talks to rocks, eats dirt, and hallucinates. They try to cure her of her hallucinations, while surviving.
Twilight Sparkle and Applejack, after an earthquake, escape to nowhere, and they meet a strange pony named Screwball. The pony talks to rocks, eats dirt, and hallucinates. They try to cure her of her hallucinations, while surviving.
You seem to have forgotten to lay a plot. While the thought is based around Screwball, we don't understand what has happened thus far to the other characters. Seems to be a sparse amount of setting in place, and I wonder what happened to Fluttershy? However, I think with a bit more information accessibility it will be a very interesting read.