In a lonely cell, a broken, previous-human's psyche is buried deeper and deeper with the emergence of several other personalities, all with their own wants, needs, wishes, and traits.
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Divide
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This... I don't know what to say.
It's brilliant, scary, enthralling, worrying, delicious, dreadful, mysterious and horrible all at once.
It's like seeing someone jump off a cliff and thinking "hey this could happen to me, too."
I'm scared. If I give you a favorite, will you leave me alone? Oh wait. Of course not.
*click
Wow, this is really great, keep up the good work.
P.S. FIRST!
Awesome, that is all.
Confusing without a larger amount of backstory but it did have enough to fill in the gaps by the end... Cool...
Holy... I was entranced in the complexity of this story. It was so deep, yet depressing, and right when there is some sliver of hope at the end, the moment is hijacked. You also managed to integrate some of the canon into this story, which is a nice feat considering that you weren't too happy about the change.
So there is a pessimistic side, a creative side, a furious side, and the normal one. And apparently, the protagonist used to be a human (or antagonist also, if you count the other personalities). And waving your hands around in an attempt at storytelling... I see what you did there.
Wait, wait, wait. So if his name was Divide, could this be some kinda replacement for The Dividing Line? Also, I'm assuming that the spell Twi used was to send him (you?) back to Earth, but it backfired and turned you into a pony and gave (?) you MPD? 'Cause if that part about the Multiple Personalities exists now, words cannot express. I can't exactly sympathize, but I can try to imagine someone taking control of my mind and doing/saying mean/weird shit. None of the outcomes are good. But if it's not true, then all's well and good, except me getting worked up for no reason.
Welp, thanks for writing yet another mind-blowing story, now I got an interesting concept to ponder for the rest of the day.
It's dangerous to go alone. Here, take this favorite.
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P.P.S. Fail!
good :D
i don't think i've ever read something quite like this before.
have an upvote and a fave
EDIT: oh, wait... it says complete. i revoke that favourite
Wow, that sucks for him, huh. Too bad, really.
That was... interesting...
Wait, did he kill Twilight?
Wow... WOW! This is spot on! And I know exactly why!
It's so...true...
This is too real. And therefore a new favorite.
I had dream like this once it was scary so I'll keep reading....
The real one only got to say six words before being forced back into his on mind and having to watch anther take over thats fucking sad!
I don't understand this chapter.
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If u read the dividing line u will understand this chapter
I passed by and reviewed this, even though its author left the site long ago. I was a bit iffy about a multiple-personality fic given this author's site history, but as that was so long ago I decided to take the fic as I found it. And I found it quite intriguing, but also rather confusing.
This is so well written, almost exactly like the way a crazy person thinks.