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Iron Quill


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Iron Quill, a unicorn who has traveled Equestria his entire adult life, Goes to Canterlot for the first time. He doesn't expect to do much. Maybe get inspiration for his next poem at the most. But when he stumbles across a mysterious mare in a club, he may find something he had never really looked for.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 2 )

3: An Unexpected Meeting
Er, wouldn't this be chapter 2?

Hmm... pretty interesting. Fresh, new, and a world of opportunities and story paths. I'm interested in seeing how this works out, and what exactly is the significance of the title and the description.

Also, you might want to get a copyeditor (I'd be happy to if you don't have one in mind.). You have a scattering of spelling and grammar mistakes, as well as some things that sort of interrupt the flow of the story.

Keep up the updates and I would go for a teen rating and longer chapters but other wise keep on keep on

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