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Brownbear96


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This is a Guide to help ponies who aren't able to fly or use magic to get the edge in a fight. (This is a book read by a character in my story "Lost Thoughts in a New World" you don't have to read that to understand this, but my reason for making this separate was so it wouldn't take up too much space in that story.)

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Wow, I have to say I really like this! EARTH PONIES RULE!!!! :rainbowdetermined2:

Also, Besides the over usage of commas I would say you got yourself a good thing started here! :twilightsmile:

You got yourself a track!

-Noakwolf the wasteland earth pony, who helps humans in Equestria with guides. lol

Glad to see I'm not the only one who thinks about pony fight clubs.

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The guide only has the one part to it, sorry

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Dang it! I didn't see the COMPLETE at the bottom. >.<

Just what I was looking for: I've been thinking that there have to have been fighting between ponies in one form or another for a little while now. I had thought of a few of them, but you thought out in good detail the advantages ponies would have over each other, particularly with the unicorns: eye contact and mental fortitude being particularly good points.
If you don't mind me saying, this would be a good piece of reference for people wanting to involve some action in their story. It was written well from Bales' perspective and was personal to him, as well as expanding somewhat on some of the seemingly idyllic Equestria's social issues.
My only criticism is for a few grammatical errors, but that's small potatoes. :twilightsmile:

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