A strange filly snatched from the jaws of death bears s zebra stripes and an almost impossible tale. She clams to be the daughter of Nightmare Moon.
Meanwhile, in Canterlot, The monarch of the night turns her thoughts to the life and child she had before her thousand years imprisonment.
Rated T for reference of the use of studs (the pony version of a male prostitute) and some scary images.
Thought I'd read this. I'm interested to see where this will go.
2614233 was my grammar all good the likes to dislikes are pretty good so far
an interesting idea, eagerly awaiting the next chapter. although i noticed there were a few grammar mistakes.
2615865 all righty
Concept seems interesting, but the grammar mistakes were plentiful. I'll stick around for a bit, though.
2631629 yes my grammer is my largest short comming but My story planing is epic
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(I hope so, because there were at least seven mistakes in that one comment.)
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Wonderful story! i really liked this beginning! All I saw that was wrong was you missed an apostrophe.
Epic and cute
Luna has a daughter wow this story has my full attention now keep up the good work update more soon