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When Queen chrysalis begs princess cadence for a love spell that will find her the perfect man, she ends up with two. Who will she choose? the shadow or the darconiquus?

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:applejackconfused:Chrysacord and Sombralis?
:rainbowderp: Ummm... I'm actually scared to read this.
Oh well.. :rainbowdetermined2:

2757584 don't worry it's not that bad. thx 4 being my first comment :raritywink:

2757642 :rainbowlaugh:
It was funny, you get an upvote! You should do some grammar fixing, but it was an alright first story! :pinkiehappy:

2757647 yay! i'm glad you liked it! :pinkiehappy:

2757840 i'm guessing you didn't like the story? :fluttershysad:

2757980 well it's my first so i can expect that from some people, but you didn't hae to be mean about it :fluttercry:

2758028
you're kiding right? I AM THE UBERDEATHNINJA!

2758077 no i am NOT kidding and if you don't knock it off i will report you!

"Once upon a time, there was a beautiful queen named Chrysalis,"

In your dreams, Chryssie. :yay:

2758243 :rainbowlaugh: haha yeah she wishes!

2758134
you wouldn't be the first. now run along and wallow in your self pity, vermin. I HAVE SPOKEN!

2758349 yeeeaah, just ignore the uberdeath whatever dude. he's a hater. Here are some tips: try not to rush your story too much, and check over your grammar every once and a while while writing your story. Keep it up! :raritywink:

2758634 thx for the tips, and yeah i will ignore him, ive seen his proffile he's a troll. i'll check my grammar more often. thx 4 reading! :pinkiehappy:

Hah discord and sombra slap fighting :rainbowlaugh:
Villains indeed.

2764831 yup for some reason thats everyones favorate part. :twilightsmile:

This was funny,lovable,and just amazing:yay:...I want to write fanfics but i can't think like i used to:fluttercry:...i used to have tons of ideas,but i guess i'm not what i used to be...do you maybe have any pointers i could use?:fluttershysad:

2769448 a good poionter is to watch the mlp episodes a few more times. pay attention to what you think would make a charactor better. i thoght chrysalis would feel better if she had someone to love, and the same goes with discord and sombra. and i just like to make my stories funny, it's my thing. i also pay attention to the trends and stuff on youtube, thats how i came up with the rap battle. combine all of these things and a little imagination and BOOM you have some insparation! i hope i helped you out. :raritywink:

:rainbowhuh: Discord married Chrysalis. :twilightoops: Okay? But, a good fic otherwise. Just has some grammar mistakes but that doesn't matter! Good job! :pinkiehappy:

2877606 lol it all started with a picture of discord kissing chrissie, then this idea popped ino my head

I started crying cuz it wasn't king sombra:raritycry: but what ev

Comment posted by Strata deleted Dec 9th, 2013

you wouldn't be the first. now run along and wallow in your self pity, vermin. I HAVE SPOKEN!

This guy is a laugh!:

2758634

What he/she said.

Otherwise... Unexpected ship, bit hey, you're a new writer. We all are/were. :twilightsmile:

May wanna check your spelling in the description...

4382135 thanks for the tip about the description! I missed that!

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