To anyone who wishes to read this,this fic was meant for the enjoyment of myself and a few friends throughout the fandom. It heavily references Ponnychan, Fimchan 4chan, and various other boards that have pony related content, and contains many grimdark elements. Any vicarious enjoyment is welcome, but keep in mind it's OC and not to be taken seriously.
Squeak lives in The OC, a place where ideas are real. Ideas concerning one thing in particular, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. In this world, where imaginings are given form, and everything is pony themed, life isn't quite as 'Love and Tolerance' as you'd think. When a murder takes place, it launches a series of events going deeper than anypony could imagine.
Great work as always Squeak, Cole Phelps couldn't have done any better himself
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Thanks! That's high praise!
New chapter as of....Right now! Enjoy.
Fookin' love this. Fantabulous work.
When will the new chapter be out? I don't wanna stop reading!
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Right now!
Haha, irish accent Lyra
This story is amazing. mfw new chapter >
Ahh, that was a great chapter! The Deus Ex Machina line made me laugh quite hard. Very exciting!
Seargent Sprinkles? Isn't he the one that wrote... Oh damn.
Squeak, this story... all my love, take all of it! If I didn't have other stuff that needed getting done i'd marathon through the whole thing, but until then lemme just say that you may be my favorite author on here. Gaia, Gun... I plan on reading your other stuff once I get a chance.
Im serously cannot tell you how much I love this.
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Wow, thanks! I'm quite happy you enjoyed it so much, and that I might be your favorite author! It's always great to hear people like my work. This fic isn't the most popular, but it's always great to hear from the people who really do enjoy it. It makes it worth writing. Hope you enjoy the rest just as much, and my other stuff as well. I suggest Number 12, and Traveler, they're Doctor Whoof fics, but you really don't have to know about Who to get them. In anycase, thanks so much for the comment! I appreciate it.
-Squeak
Unfortunately for this place , at 7 o'clock tonight, i am going to drop two Tsara-Bomba grade scandals. There will be no mercy, no survival. Brony culture is doomed.
There's more than a hint of Lobsang Cut-My-Own-Throat Dibbler in the way Pacce acts . . .
Whoo! Five chapters in and I wish more than ever that I could find time to marathon this...
Also, correct me if i'm wrong but Pacce wrote "Junior Speedsters Forever" right?
And while I'm here I wanted to ask for permission for somthing. I was wondering if I could use the OC as the setting for a story. I've been juggling some ideas and they've been shaping up to look more and more like this wonderful little world you've written here.
Anyway, great chapter and I look forward to reading more when I get a chance.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Where is the rest? I really want to keep going.
I'd sure love to see this get updated. I find it's style quite humorous.
"Gun, with occasional music" is one of my favorite novel. Jonathan Lethem is truly a great writer. I've gotta start reading this.
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I was reading it when I started the story. Loved it, hence the name. It's not a straight crossover, or adaptation, but I kept the noir of it I like to think.
I hope you enjoy it!
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As long as you keep that noir in mind I'm sure it'll be great.
AMAZING!
As usual, I finish a chapter and want to just keep reading!
The sense of humor and adventure in this fic are top notch.
Charlie and the chocolate factory comes to mind with the transportation system.
Good work!
This is on indefinite hiatus with no chance of a new chapter coming in the next weeks, right?
Great story... Like always.
I want to read more.
HAHAHAHAHA! What a way to die. That made me laugh so hard, and it was brilliant.
Hey, if you and your friend need a lift to Mc'ronals, give me a call. You can always account for my taxi, but bewhere I drive like a maniac as well, and the seatbelts do prevent you from falling into another story.
If you hungry as well, you can eat at the Fourth Wall Restaurant.
-The Character
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Any chance this is ever going to be continued? I found this story last summer and have been absolutely dying with this cliffhanger feeling!
5873317 Please help me, I can't stop obsessing over this unfinished fic
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Well, the peep's been gone forever, think they're doing tumblr stuff instead now. Not sure how I'm supposed to help. I'm just one incompetent.