Growing up in Cloudsdale was hard for Sky Light, always different from everypony else with no talents other than his fireworks which were the only things that he seemed to be able to do correctly.
Who will he meet on his journey across Equestria after he leaves Cloudsdale? Will you follow him on his Journey? What will happen with the Ponies he had left behind to pursue his own dreams?
Not too shabby, the wording of a few things got me, and the changelings character feels a littleā¦ shaky? I dunno
Better then I could ever do, will keep reading
You have my curiosity