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ArtichokeLust

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Discord, Trixie, Gilda, Lightning Dust, Flim, and Flam. What do they have in common? They were all rejected by their friends, acquaintances, and Equestria.

By a few stokes of luck, and a little magic, somehow they find each other. And suddenly they feel welcome for a change.
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Cancelled Published: May 20th, 2013 Download
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Tachyon Xenophile
Tachyon Xenophile #1 · Nov 3rd, 2013 · · · Trixie has an Owie ·
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18000 words...
Discord...
Trixie...
About 6 months old...
How has no one commented?!

ArtichokeLust
ArtichokeLust #2 · Nov 7th, 2013 · · · Trixie has an Owie ·
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3435333

I don't know. My other story has a lot of comments.

Then again, that story has a descriptive title/picture and one of the main characters slaps Celestia in the first chapter.

If I really wanted attention I could just write a spin-off of a popular story or character like RealityCheck did, or I could compete in the December writers competition, or I could actually try to advertise the stuff, or I could write a bunch of one-shots...

But I kind of like not advertising my stories, it's more like they're hidden treasures that way... if they do happen to be good... I would like some critiques though.

Tachyon Xenophile
Tachyon Xenophile #3 · Nov 7th, 2013 · · · Trixie has an Owie ·
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3455053 Bro/sis/pony, do you want me to Shamelessly Promote this?

eternal nothingness
eternal nothingness #6 · Jan 2nd, 2014 · · · Building the apex ·
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discord needs chaos it feeds HIM:pinkiehappy:

eternal nothingness
eternal nothingness #7 · Jan 2nd, 2014 · · · Flim and Flam Flimflammed? ·
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oh boy lightning dust, flim and flam, trixie, and discord all in one place!:twilightoops::facehoof: were doomed!....or this will be awesome can't wait to see:pinkiehappy:

eternal nothingness
eternal nothingness #8 · Jan 2nd, 2014 · · · Trixie has an Owie ·
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ah trixie wonder how you will "slap: celestia :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE IT!
until than:pinkiehappy:

-Serpent-
-Serpent- #9 · Mar 16th, 2014 · · · Trixie has an Owie ·
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Why is this awesome story on hiatus?!?! :fluttercry:

-Serpent-
-Serpent- #10 · Mar 16th, 2014 · · · Trixie has an Owie ·
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I'll collaborate with you :pinkiehappy:

Pete100
Pete100 #11 · May 7th, 2021 · · · Discord ·
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Discord was sitting next to Celestia in her tidy little wooden carriage. They were both flying through the dusk to some town where some ponies were dying or something, and Celestia would try to use Discord as some sort of Deus-Ex device.

What’s that?

He never seemed to be able to explain to her the simple fact that he fed on order. If he created order instead of chaos, he would starve to death. In fact, if he didn't do either for long enough, he would starve to death anyway. The only reason he had survived a thousand years as a statue was because he was a statue.

Wait, how does that work?

Pete100
Pete100 #12 · May 7th, 2021 · · · Lightning Dust ·
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-They have aspirations too, and maybe they cared about those aspirations more than your goals. The voice still remained calm. It sounded like it was hiding something from her, and she would find out!

Aren’t those the same thing?

So what! She sat up, I've heard of ponies that made far worse mistakes! They didn't have their lives ruined! No, some of them actually benefited from it.

To think that I should be punished worse than them is just horseapples! She continued.

I mean, that is true.

Pete100
Pete100 #13 · May 7th, 2021 · · · Canterlot ·
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Finally, he said. "'Discord' was a name that was given to me for my actions, like many pony names. It doesn't decide everything I do."

Really?

Pete100
Pete100 #14 · May 7th, 2021 · · · Covert operations ·
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So magic comes from emotions?

Pete100
Pete100 #15 · May 7th, 2021 · · · Building the apex ·
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Above the bushes, one could see a light-teal blur quickly worming its way through the maze using the right hand rule. Every 90-degree turn resulted in a flash of sparks that looked like fireworks. After about a minute of the mesmerizing display, the maze must have been memorized, because Lightning Dust started shooting between random points in the maze as fast as possible.

What is she doing?

Pete100
Pete100 #16 · May 7th, 2021 · · · Flim and Flam Flimflammed? ·
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"IT HAS BEEN THREE DAYS! THREE DAYS, DISCORD!" Luna yelled in the traditional Canterlot voice, almost without noticing.

"HOW HARD IS IT FOR THOU TO KEEP THY GRUBBY PAWS OFF OUR CITIZENS FOR ONE MEASLY WEEK, SO THAT WE MAY REST!?" Luna yelled. Taking a closer look, Discord noticed she had bags under her eyes from lack of sleep.

Hey, that’s a record.

"Wait-a-minute," Discord interrupted, "I didn't know you required sleep, especially since you are the princess of the night." He was genuinely curious about this. One of the many reasons for sleep was improving learning, and it would be a waste to throw that out.

It is?

"WE DO NOT CARE FOR THY PETTY COMPLIMENTS, AND WE SHALL NOT LET THEE OFF EASILY NO MATTER WHAT AMOUNT OF SUCKING UP THOU PARTAKES IN!" Said the butthurt Luna.

How much screaming would it take for her to bust someone’s eardrums? Because, there’s no way no one hasn’t gone deaf.

"STILL, 10 MINUTES DUNGEON!" She yelled with glee and pumped a hoof.

Well, at least we now know who’s the most violent out of the princesses.

Pete100
Pete100 #17 · May 8th, 2021 · · · Thinking for Tomorrow ·
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I’ll be honest, I was confused about this episode.

Pete100
Pete100 #18 · May 8th, 2021 · · · Sociopaths ·
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Something tells me both motion and lightning dust is going to get jumped by the whole whether team.

Pete100
Pete100 #19 · May 8th, 2021 · · · Trixie has an Owie ·
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Was this chapter supposed to be cute?

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