How to Cope With New Bodies
There was nothing but a sharp ringing all around the yellow mare. Fluttershy opened her eyes, greeted by a black void. "What is this place? Where am I?" Fluttershy looked around, and noticed her pet bunny by her side, knocked unconscious. "Angel! Are you alright?" Fluttershy tried to reach for Angel, but as soon as she did, she floated upwards. "What? No! Angel!" Fluttershy panicked, believing that she would be separated from Angel. Frantically, she flapped her wings, trying her best to not be separated from Angel. Eventually, she reached her bunny and grabbed onto him, hugging tightly. Angel then awoke, and dove into a similar state of shock as his owner. "Shh, don't worry. It'll be okay... I hope," Fluttershy said, trying to calm her pet bunny down, feeling scared herself. "Oh Angel, where are we?" she asked, hoping to get an explanation. Angel tried to recall everything that happened before he woke up. He thought about the lake, the carrots, and... the light. Angel soon figured it out. He began making gestures, trying his best to tell Fluttershy what happened to them.
"What? The light? Is that was got us here?" she asked. Angel nodded, and continued to make gestures, continuing to explain what he knew.
"That's right. Whatever that light-portal thing was sucked us into it. So you're saying it took us here?" Angel nodded again, and continued with his gestures.
"But how did that thing come to Equestria?" Angel knew the answer to that.
"What? Discord? He wouldn't do that." Angel grew mad. He didn't care how nice and good Discord had become; Angel knew that he was to blame for this. Angel continued to explain.
"You're saying that Discord was doing something that opened up this portal? That's why we're in this place?" Fluttershy asked. Angel nodded, a bit saddened. He could hear the betrayal in Fluttershy's voice. "There has to be some sort of misunderstanding. Discord promised to use his magic for good, and the only times he wouldn't would just be for harmless pranks." A few tears began to flow down Fluttershy's cheeks. "Why would he do something so awful like trap us inside here? Why?" Fluttershy broke into tears. Angel tried his best to comfort her, but to no avail. He began to regret telling Fluttershy the truth, but he knew it had to be done. He would never forgive Discord for doing this. Fluttershy stopped crying. "I should've known he'd go back to his old ways," she said coldly. "I really believed, I really hoped that Discord had actually changed for the better, but I guess I was wrong." Fluttershy looked at Angel, then remembered their current situation. "Oh Angel, how are we gonna get out of here?" Right when she said that, a small light appeared. "Oh, maybe that's a way out," Fluttershy said, large feelings of hope appearing inside her. Angel thought it was very convenient that that light appeared after Fluttershy asked how to get out. Beginning to feel that it was a little too convenient, Angel grew suspicious. With Angel safely held by her side, Fluttershy began making a mixture of flying/floating movements towards the light. As she moved closer, the light began to blind her. As soon as she got a few inches near the light, she and Angel were sucked in, generating a similar sensation to when they first entered the void behind them. The feeling was too much, as it caused Fluttershy and Angel to black out. While he was doing so, he felt that Fluttershy had made a huge mistake.
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Once again, Fluttershy was the first to come to. She felt Angel by her side, and looked at him, but what she saw wasn't her bunny. Or at least, he didn't look like it. "Angel, what happened to your fur? What happened to you ears? What happened to your waist?" She pointed at the large bunch of fur that was around what she believed was Angel's waist. As soon as she did, though, she stared at what she was pointing with. Fluttershy stared in disbelief at this weird new... thing where her hoof should've been. "What happened to my hoof? What are these... things on it?" She also noticed some fabric on her... limb, and soon felt it on most of her body. Fluttershy soon realized that other things might've changed about her physical appearance, too. She stood up, waking up Angel. As she did, she realized she stood up higher than she ever had before. She was about twice her size in height. "Why am I so tall?" Fluttershy asked. Angel rubbed his eyes, a little annoyed by the sudden awakening. As he did, though, he felt... different.
Angel looked at Fluttershy, and quickly exclaimed. "B-b-bun! Bun Buneary!" He soon realized that he actually said something, whatever gibberish it was. "Bun?" he said again. "B-b-bun! Buneary? Buneary?!" Angel was listening to his new voice, and couldn't believe how ridiculous it sounded. He soon remembered what caused him to literally find his voice in the first place. He stared back at whatever it was that was next to him. His eyes were greeted by some weird pink-haired... thing.
"Is that really you, Angel?" Fluttershy asked, seeing a resemblance in the behavior of her bunny and this bunny-like creature.
Angel recognized Fluttershy's voice, and realized it really was her. He then thought, Of course it is!, but what came out instead was "Bun bun Buneary!" Angel pinched the bridge of his nose, still getting used to his new voice.
"It is? It is!" Fluttershy was soon filled with relief. "Oh Angel, I'm so glad to see you! Or... to see that you're okay, for the most part. What happened to us?" Fluttershy asked.
"Bun bun," Angel said.
"You don't know this time?" Fluttershy sighed, "Whatever we are, at least we're safe. Oh, but how are we gonna get back to Equestria?" she asked.
"Bun bun bun..." Angel said, saying in his mind, I don't know...
"Speaking of Equestria, I don't think we're there anymore. Where are we?" Fluttershy looked around, only seeing trees everywhere. "Are we in the Everfree Forest? That might explain these new bodies... Oh, look at me. I don't have my hooves, wings, or tail anymore."
"Bun Buneary? Bun bun bun Buneary bun bun!" Angel said, wanting to say What about me? I have a whole bunch of fur now!
Fluttershy smiled. "But it makes you look cuter!"
"Bun bun..." Angel said, meaning Good point...
Fluttershy thought for a moment. "Hmm... I guess we should try to find our way out, and see if Twilight can help us..." At that, Fluttershy picked up Angel, who had gained a lot of weight from excess fur, and began walking through the forest.
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2630220 Success!
um, you might want to make each chapter longer, by a lot. it's hard to get into a story if each chapter is too short. also, cyndaquil FTW.
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2630718 Yeah, the Prologue was meant to be short, the first chapter, by my standards, isn't too short, and I kinda just rushed a bit on the second chapter.
2630718 Usually, I'm able to write from about 2,500 to about 4,000 words for a chapter. I was just eager to get this story out.
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2,500... a bit short for my tastes, but not bad. try to at least hit 3,000 if you can, though it's best to avoid pointless padding.
ADORABLE WIDDLE ANGEL!!! All we need is a female Pikachu to swoon over him.
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Where's the human story tag?
2631092 ...Oh. My bad...
This is my first Human story...
cant wait till some bug cathcher trainer jumps out and attacks angel... lols will be had.
2631117 ...Reading my mind, are we?
poor fluttershy. angels going to get taken away from her by a crazed pokemon collecter.
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Oh btw, I've blogged about your story. Hope it helped.
2631183 Thank you! That's very much apreciated!
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You're very welcome.
You're featured on the box, Derping!
Darn, I feel a bit sad that I didn't find this story by chance, rather through Chaotic, but I'm glad I found it regardless! Is it decided who Leon picks yet? Not sure how the votes are going, but grass type Pokémon are my favorite! I would go for Chikorita, personally, but Leon's personality should be the thing that determines which one! Unless you're going to shape his personality around his Pokémon... meh, you've probably already decided anyway! Wow, I can't wait for the next chapter! I love how fast these chapters appear to be coming, however! Chapter One's length was my preferred word span, but the Prologue and Chapter Two are good, too! This story is actually kind of exciting!
2630834 xD
2631146 Not the way i see it. You know how in the anime if a pokemon is letting you hold it or be near you. It's know to be your pokemon.
2631355 Nope, not yet. I'm keeping the votes up until the 30th. Then, I will write/post chapter three on the 31, revealing which starter was the most popular among the comments. So, everyone, please cast your vote for who you want Leon to choose. Also, sorry for the five-day break. School just let out, so I want to take this time to get through all of my Read Laters.
Okay, no romance tag, so at least Leon or whoever won't be crushing on Flutters, or Angel falling for a Pokemon.
Fluttershy felt a little OOC for how quickly she decided that Discord had gone back to his old ways, honestly. Considering how patient she was in the show, I would think it would take more evidence than that to decide that Discord was evil again. (Like him showing up and gloating, or... whatever. Just seems too... sudden.)
Still, this isn't badly written, so I'll fave for now, and like if it stays good.
This... this, good sir, is a genius idea. I WILL be reading it soon. And I have no doubt that I WILL enjoy it.
This looks like it's going to get interesting.
I hope you have a plot relevant reason for the clothes to appear beyond "didn't want Fluttershy to show up naked", otherwise you have major plot hole.
MOAR!
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Hurray! Chikorita, as was aforementioned, would be my vote then!
Miltank used rollout!
I hope you are buzy with next chapter because i can't wait til next chapter
Could you also give a discibtion of what flutershy wears
This is rather intriguing.
So, trapped in a new world where you fight regularly!
Will she be as useless as May was in the early series, or will she she grow to be a successful trainer?
Awaiting further releases.
2631339 I know! It was amazing to me. Now that I have so many people reading my story, I'll try my best to deliver an amazing story about Fluttershy's adventures in Johto.
I'm not going to forget about my other stories, though, even if they're not that popular.
2631394 I vote Totodile! TototototototototototototoDile!
*does little Totodile dance*
2631482 Well, she just got sucked into a black void. Fluttershy was trying to find a reasonable explanation for why this was happening to her. When she got one, she didn't want to believe Discord was still evil, but being that she knew how Discord used to be, it started making sense to her. Also, the fear in that Pegasus would have her reasoning fazed, so she came to that decision rather quickly because she didn't see any other explanation for why he did that. She was so terrified of losing Angel, she grew rage and disappointment when she found out Discord did this.
At least, that's what I think she'd do.
Oh, and Leon's 10. You know, at that age where girls are still "icky", and stuff. As for Angel, no romance from him, but brief romance to him, too brief to have a Romance tag.
2631638 Rated E for Everyone.
I don't know how it'd be so E if a 10 year old boy found a naked girl in the forest. A grown naked girl, at that. At least, I see the mane six in their 20s, youngest age, probably 18.
If you met a naked girl in the forest (assuming you're ten at the time), you'd probably want to help her find clothes. I wonder how citizens of Goldenrod City or Azalea Town would respond to a 10 year old and a naked girl wandering around, looking for clothes.
Also, I kind of thought it made sense if her coat got turned into a sweater, or something like that.
2632479 Something along the lines of this:
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Remember, please cast your vote for the starter.
Unless you don't mind who Leon chooses...
should choose totodile as the starter, and totodile should totally almost end up eating Angel
Cyndaquill!
2632819 Hence the title, Pokémon Tamer. You're not too late on the vote. Voting ends on the 30th, and the next chapter is to be posted on the 31st. If you're gonna ask why, look at my previous comment towards Brony Pony.
And the adventure begins!
2632836 Yes, I don't exactly enjoy those types of stories. I had the entire 'history' lesson for readers to understand what the weird felling/energy was that Discord sensed. The scene where he opens up the rift was very drawn out for me, as I wanted to describe what was happening, and exactly how it was happening.
Cyndaquil or Chickorita.
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>Stories don't get featured on the box unless if they have over 4k words
Since when? Back in the day, 1000-word fics were getting featured all the time. Still do, AFAIK.
When is the next chapter coming out?
2633019 On the 31st. I'm giving the readers time to vote for Leon's starter.
2633033 I vote Cyndaquil
cyndaquil
I vote Chikorita, but any of them are good. Bayleef is just my fifth favorite Pokemon.
cyndaquil. No doubt about it.
Totodille
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Totodile, use Dance Attack! It was super effective. Definitely voting for Totodile.