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Zamairiac


A somewhat well known author, who is also well known for his inconsistent upload schedule. (My Patreon!)

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You got me with Celestia x human so yeah plus it can only get better.

I was right it gets better.

This is here! Aww sweet, does that mean the rest of them are on the way? Either way faved and following :pinkiehappy:

How long must I wait for this story this to progress to even more awesomeness.

Wooo Spetsnaz pinkie pie out.

So awesome to see this story also added here.
You should add this to the Human in Equestria group. Could get the story, and you, more attention.

Good luck with all of your endeavors.

2586805 Not long, the third chapter is up and the rest will be uploaded sooner or later.

:pinkiehappy:

I knew that the story would be popular here.
By the way, don't get discourage by dislikes. Especially when there is no comment that say why. It usually means that the voter just doesn't like the genre.

2587073 Meh dislikes don't bother me, I've had plenty of flames on Fanfiction with this story.

On the other hand, I'm wondering whether I should just chuck up all the chapters now or wait until later.

Btw editing chapters takes a little bit :P

Thanks for the comments, favs ect :pinkiehappy:

I had to unfav then fav again so I could get email updates for this awesomeness'

Wooo Spetsnaz pinkie pie out.

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Very true.
I think it would be good to post a chapter a day, or every other day. You know, build up the suspense for those that don't go to fanfiction. Plus this way this way by the time you are caught up here the beginning of your new story could be ready.
In the end it is your choice.
Take all of the time that you need then.
You are very welcome.

another excellent chapter :pinkiesmile: keep up the good work.:twilightsmile:

Impressive story... That old " born into the earth with no parents" stuff :coolphoto:

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There will be sex later my friend, just thought I'd let you know :scootangel:

Chapter 9 to be precise :pinkiehappy:

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Cannot tell if sarcasm :applejackunsure:

But if not then thanks :pinkiehappy:

If this is a side story where is the original

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Hasn't been done yet. This is one of three leading up to it :twilightblush:

Comment posted by Bronybro 117 deleted May 16th, 2013

Oh the story has that "something" to it all right. I hage to say it doesn't feel cliché like most of HiE stories.
However, it is in a dire need of editing. Plenty of missing commas, repetitions and awkward style here and there.
It doesn't warrant a downvote, as I mainly care for the story itself, not it's form. So it was more of an upvote :) The form could be improved though.

What do you think?
PS Forgive any silly errors, it's 2 am and I'm typing it on a phone

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The fact that he had no parents ect is explained later on. But I agree it is pretty cliche, but then again when you know something that works, you use it :)

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Hmm I've noticed some of what you've said and to be honest it's really just some lazy mistakes that I can never be bothered to correct.

When the time comes, I will see what I can do. :)

Well, I like what Im seeing so far :)

that was... I want to see pony Dan :rainbowlaugh:

CIA

"*sees title*"
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"That about sums up his mentality at the moment."

Aww dang it, that last line was way too cheesy and yet it works :D

Please don't tell me Chris going to be transformed into black alicorn with red mane, lol

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Random Trivia!

The Alicorn And Her Prince was going to be the original title :pinkiehappy:

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No, the Main Humans will ALWAYS be Human.

I hate that let's turn the Human into a pony crap XD

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Makes more sense and is a lot less disgusting than a human banging a horse... :moustache:

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Perhaps, but it's not the way I intend this story to go I'm afraid.

So to be blunt, the Human will be banging the horse :rainbowwild:

2587368 I agree with you on that, but please don't make him one of those humans that say his own species is a monster and he the only good guy on Earth.

Alright, that did it for me.

I've seen plenty of sarcasm in this story, but when Celestia quoted Dan and called him a "charming individual", that did it.

Favorited. And eagerly waiting for your next update.

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You DO NOT have to worry about that my friend...Celestia isn't exactly an angel in this story.

And that's as much as I'm going to spoil :pinkiehappy:

But no. He will not be all like "I am the only nice Human in the world and everybody else is horrible and treats everyone like shit!"

It'll be more like "Yeah some people are bad and some are good. I'm not perfect myself but I don't judge my whole race on a few personal bad experiences."

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Thanks buddy :)

And yes, Celestia can be a bit of a sarcastic troll sometimes XD

Welp I'm hooked. This is one legendary fic!

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Thanks mate, expect more Chapters within the next Twenty four hours :pinkiehappy:

2587693 you rock mate! Can't wait to see what happens next!

In response to the title:

It's almost easy...

And now I begin reading the story in hopes of it being good. Here we go...

This story sounds VERY much like one that I've been thinking about. I'm not saying that you stole my idea or anything, I was just surprised as I read the description. I like this story and I really want to read it. I'll just have to make some changes to my idea.

Really enjoying the story so far; im always drawn to these types of fics. I must say ,however, does anyone find the punishment of turning someone into a pony against their will (if that is the case) rather abhorent and evil? Regardless of how bad that person was to begin with.
Anyway, man, keep up the good work.
Cheers.

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I do find it absolutely disgusting!

But....:twilightsmile:

The only thing that is bothering me is that this story says Celestia's eyes are blue... There not blue.

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I'd say he got off lightly. Being left to rot in a true dungeon, not one of our modern posh prison cells, is worse. At least he's got his freedom... I think? Then again, who knows how many statues in the Royal Gardens were hoof-crafted and not just "examples".

Yes please continue your story, I want to see what happen next

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Forgive me for this, but I am colorblind and mistook her real color.

Just think of this as a different universe where some things are different :)

I read your story and must say that it is interesting. Great job, hope to see more soon.

Wow, this story has a LOT of potential, love it so far! Your writing style is vivid but not cluttered. This is already one of my all time favorites, just because of how excellent it is, plot, writing, and all. Keep going!

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