Ever since she was a filly, Luna has felt unloved by all save her dear sister. As she grows these feeling fester and boil till she can stand it no longer. She rises up and searches for a power to crush the sun, hurting everypony in her way. The moon will rise, the moon will rule.
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i am seriously loving this story. this probably has to be the best story about luna's youth that i've had the pleasure of reading.
i do hope for more and i also give major thanks to the author :0) 
nice story
this is pretty good it just needs some grammar fixes
I'm calling sombra being the daemon
Just a brilliant story, you write beautifully.
Why thank you ^^
thank you!
Excellent story so far, in terms of the writing. I would suggest you get an editor/proofreader, though.
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Thank you, I do have an occasional editor whoes knowledge of grammar is a bit better then mine but she can't always get on a computer to be able to do it. I try my best though
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Thank you for that
a few errors:
Chief
Chef
Nope it's discord
Am I the only one wondering when is the next chapter?