While at a conference Trixie's assistant Pokey Pierce and Duke Greengrass's assistant Notary meet up and go drinking. One things leads to another and they spend the night telling tails about the trials and tribulations of working with their respective bosses.
My seconds entry to this months Lunaverse challenge on the topic of first meetings.
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HA! Hilarious.
This was quite good. :D You did a great job with Pokey and Notary, and I loved their stories too.
Well done, quite a few laughs to be had. I'm drawing a blank on the blue/green blonde unicorn brat though. It's just not coming to me who that is.
Very well-written, funny, and even heartwarming in the right places. I love a good 'Lower-Deck' episode, and this was definitely a good one.
Like I said when you PM'd it to me, very good! I enjoyed this a lot.
This was really fun to read. :3
" Really, she wasn’t much more than a filly, her coat a deep aquamarine and her expertly styled mane blond."
One quick trip to the list of ponies on the Wiki later...
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Oookay....
That's one mean alot... :P
This is hilarious! Notary and Pokey are both really good characters, and Trixie and Greengrass are written really well here. I especially loved the bit where Greengrass threatened Smooth with a duel - that was excellent.
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We'll I did say that Spoiled was more of a filly than a mare
Kidding. She's an OC (no, not an oceanic creature) In just wanted a blond unicorn in Green Grass's bed, if I had to give her a 'real' name I'd probably go for something suitably equestrian like Paris Hilton.
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Curse you Spelling and Grammar, my old nemeses (sp.?)
So. Much. Win.
¡This story is nonstop laughs!
wow, I guess Pokey just isn't that 'sharp' now is he?
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Well, not after X many drinks he's not Alcohol is his kryptonite.
*Grins* Definitely an excellent result, though I'd love to read that spoiled brat fic
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Thanks, I've put the corrections through.