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Some Bronies would give anything to meet the inhabitants of Equestria. Unfortunately for one of them, he gets his wish.

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Now that was a plot twist I never saw coming. Great job!

Well that is definittly a twist there did not see.that coming at all

Yeah, I'm going with the general sentiment so far. Didn't see that coming. :rainbowderp:

So I am assuming the portal leads to Earth. And since Changlings live on 'the magic of love' wouldn't they starve to death here?

I mean sure there are tons of good people but in Equestria there are no wars and people don't hate each other all the time. And besides on Earth there is no magic so there wouldn't even by a magic of love to feed on.

:pinkiecrazy: The changlings will suffer a horrible death, slowly starving :pinkiecrazy: not being able to change. Then eventually they will wrivle up and die :pinkiecrazy:

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>:)

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Who says they need to stay? They know there's a subsection of humanity that is particularly vulnerable to their shenanigans. All they need to do is acquire some... souvenirs to take back home. :pinkiecrazy:

2588786 Or... they adopt certain Human eating habits :pinkiecrazy:

'Gasp' what a twist!

Dude... You could have gone PLACES with this one. Why would you not continue, there are so many possibilities!

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This was originally just an experiment. I did brainstorm something of a follow-up story, but I'm one of those people with a ton of hastily-scribbled outlines hanging around my GDocs, so it can be tough to choose. I'll make an effort to revisit this concept in the future.

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