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dragonpony111


Just a man who enjoys the show (especially Derpy and Dinky) that also has a thing for writing sad/feelgood stories, usually about baby ponies.

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Berry Punch is left homeless again after showing up drunk, and promises her daughter she will stop drinking.

Artwork made and used with permission by goldenmercurydragon

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 13 )

well now... Feels. That is all.

A little sad but I liked it and I'd love to see a follow up about Berry trying to remain sober.

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like 75% it wont happen. this story does have the complete tag.

Nicely done little one shot

I feel pretty sad about the situation. I'm glad that she didn't hit Ruby and at least gave her some money for food. Berry is probably mad at herself, and taking it out on the world. I don't believe she'll stick to her words at the end but there does feel to be some hope. I hate that this happens anywhere, fictional universes or not. My moral compass aside it was a good story.

2577195 Damn sad, but also damn good! I like to think that Berry will learn something from this whole thing. MUSTACHES! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

More? I don't think there are enough Berry punch stories about her and her daughter.

Nice story, thanks for the twist at the end. Perhaps you can go somewhere with it. :twilightsmile:

7488791 This had the complete tag before I even thought of writing an epilogue. So anything further likely won't happen sorry.

7490988 Understood, if you ever had the displeasure of reading my tripe, you'll see I'm one of those that don't know when to stop. But good story never the less.

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