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While journeying between dimensions to try and warn the Toa Nuva of possible doom, Takanuva, the Toa that controls both light and shadow, finds himself in a world of purely organic and powerful beings known as ponies. Now he must find a way to leave this universe and continue toward Karda Nui. But there's something else in Equestria that shouldn't be, and a Toa may be just what is needed.

Takes place after Takanuva's Journey, The Kingdom, and Dark Mirror, but before The Final Battle.
The story takes a lot from the Bionicle storyline, particularly that of 2008. If anything confuses you, I recommend the amazing resource of biosector01.com.

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 42 )

“I must say, yours is the best tasting dirt so far.”

I love that line! Good so far. Keep it up.

This fic is great!!!!
I think takanuva is more like 10 feet tall :pinkiesmile:

Would there be a possibility of seeing the phantoka/mistika ?

Keep up the great work!

5 out of 5 mustaches

Thanks. It's probably one of my favorite lines I've ever written. :rainbowwild:

He's still a normal height at this time, so nothing huge, and I've always seen Toa to be just a little taller then humans, so not much bigger then Celestia.

The other Toa probably won't show up (but I do have plans for them later, along with a crazy half-Piraka :trixieshiftright:)

I'm glad you both like it. Thanks for the support!

Dunno why the like-to-dislike ratio was 2-3 when I first found this story. Very cool idea, and very well written! :pinkiehappy:

(Though it looks like there's 5 likes now. Glad to see that got sorted out!)

2573152 I'm sensing Vezon!:yay: Could you bring Kardas along as well?

Oh a Bioncile story that stars Takanuva? (who is one of my favorite toa and I always wanted to see more done with him in the main story), this is going to me fun.

2572884 I heard that on average toa are 7 feet tall or near there

2574439 I remembered hearing about that, when I read one of the book that pohatu mentioned takanuva being a bit taller that the last time he saw him, so I only assumed 10 feet would be appropriate :)

That's true, but that was after he was exposed to Karda Nui, which he obviously hasn't been yet.

So awesome!!!!!!!!

We need bigger chapters!!!!!!!

Thanks. :twilightsmile:
I'm doing small chapters, as I'm writing this in my free time, which is also short.

However, short chapters means they'll be coming more often.

2577735 although the chapters are small they are written well, in fact I would say youre style of writing for this story is pretty close to greg farshteys, you even kinda got his sense of humor down (which is awesome)

I LOVE THIS STOR!!!!!!! I DEMAND TO SEE MORE!!!!!!!!:heart::twilightsheepish::heart::pinkiecrazy:

Thanks. That's exactly what I was going for.


Takanuva welcome to Equestria, where you can kick butt easily

Not bad. I'm enjoying this story so far, and you definitely know how to end a chapter well. However, watch your grammar. There are a few places where you said one word where I think you meant another very similar word. Other than that though, I don't really have much to complain about. Keep up the good work!

As founder of the Bionicle crossovers group I must say good job

Takanuva will use his light to impress Celestia, I bet

2709733 how much do you wanna bet?

My god yes. And then he introduces the ponies to the sport of Kolhii :pinkiehappy:

"Huge robot home"?


:pinkiegasp: SHE KNOWS*
*quick offer her up as sacrifice to makuta to appease him

/generic keep going comment here

In all seriousness, however, I love where this story is going.

11 months later....................

...there is an update. After finally slaying the beast known as life, I've almost finished the next chapter. Hopefully I'll have it up in the next day or two.

yippee-ki-ya :rainbowlaugh: I for one am glad that your continuing this fanfic. A few things I think you should take note of though :applejackunsure:. Spelling typos, spelling typos everywhere :pinkiegasp:
It didn't take me out of the experience but they were a bit annoying at times. That aside though your doing a great job. :moustache:
P.S. I'm a Bionicle fan :twilightblush: I wish lego was still making bionicle toys :raritycry:

Not bad, not perfect either, but its still very interesting, of course no offense if I sound very judgmental.:rainbowdetermined2:

this needs to update like fuck me....

4033699 no you fool you only make her more powerful

Hey, buddy, you uh.. gonna update this?

Well, this was interesting. I hope to see more of it as time goes on.

“I must say, yours is the best tasting dirt so far.”

I do so believe that is sarcasm right there.

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