Rainbow Dash is extremely excited. Her Father is coming for his first visit to Ponyville. However is it going to be all good between them when she realises who he's brought with him? And is she ever going to be okay with her new 'wicked' stepmother?
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Rainbow Dash is extremely excited. Her Father is coming for his first visit to Ponyville. However is it going to be all good between them when she realises who he's brought with him? And is she ever going to be okay with her new 'wicked' stepmother?
This is funny.
Definitely liking the concept I can't wait to see where this goes
TRIXIE!!!!
As soon as I saw the description, I saw the characters and I knew it was Trixie. LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
Bit weird because wouldn't Trixie be RD's age.
mind selfdestruction
2572652 Thanks. Never been called funny before-- unless I'm hyper and don't mean to be .
2572666 I will try to make it good enough for you to read then. Thanks for reading.
2572675 Oh yeah. Trixie Trouble.
2572739 Haha. 'Tis right. I didn't try to hide it either.
2573182 No idea. For some reason because I was ill I decided to write this. My mind does weird things when it's ill.
2573442 Yep, they would be. Even more awkward really. But many classic and modern stories have the children and stepmothers around the same age.
2573467 I hope your mind survived the ordeal.
2575772dont worry this my 3rd mind selfdestruction.it'll live.now update soon please.
It´s her new wife or her new pet?
a bit short and to the point but still not bad i think just having a bit longer chapters would be great but i've always had trouble with writing anything longer than 3 sentences so i can't really talk heh
The Great And Powerful Rainbow Dash shall perform a sonic rainboom!
Stepmother the same age as me...seems legit.
Well... i can think how was rainbow face when she met the grat an powarful trrrrrrixie