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ROBCakeran53 asked me to upload my Unofficial sequel to his My Little Dashie on FIMfiction too, so I took his advice.

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A few days after Rainbow Dash had returned to Ponyville, she was reunited with her dad again, but this time, her father isn't her dad anymore.

I will be placing this on Hiatus as I am currently busy with my stuffs now and has returned back to school, hopefully I could get the 3rd chapter by July the earliest.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 12 )

I got 1 word for you...

Awesome!:pinkiehappy:

Looking forward to more Epicness!:pinkiehappy:

207277 Hint: The 2nd chapter isn't going to be that epic yet, but the 3rd chapter is! :rainbowkiss:

F*cking wibbly wobbly timey wimey spell castin' doohickeys...
Other then that,I must say this is the 'happiest' MLD sequels I've read,albeit too rushed. You should have built up the drama and intensity with 2 or 3 chapters with the same amt. of words you have now before really going at it. Note your writing mistakes too --- though my eyes are pretty tired right now your mistakes are still easily noticeable :pinkiegasp: so...WORK ON IT!

wow realy applejack and rainbow dash lesbians :rainbowhuh:, but with the new conseped of the dad now being rainbows little brother thats a wierd way to put it but im looking forward to the next chapter, this is godofwar88 and im the fanfic critic.

308753 Well, honestly :ajsmug:, and yet trying not be annoyed :rainbowhuh:, I know that this is short, but this is what I had in mind, and I know where my spelling and grammar stands at, and I am already trying to improve on it, so please don't rub it onto me, thank you. :scootangel:

Well...at least you know. Keep on going,an improve your skills every step of the way. Go for it! :raritywink: P.S. Sorry if I offended you or something :applecry:

Wow....that was the greatest thing i have read in a very long time, you sir or madam have made my day, and the music....fantastic really added to the grandness of this story.

Well i love it.

Keep up the great work.

This sequel is as great as the others I have read so far :pinkiehappy:
In all honesty I was unprepared for the AppleDash thing :derpyderp1:
congrats to you hoping part 3 will be just as entertaining as these two :pinkiehappy:

I like the story overall:pinkiehappy:
The only complaint I have is that Rainbow and Applejack become "lovers". That aside, nice work!

I haven’t read the story yet, really looking forward to based on the comments!

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