• Member Since 2nd Apr, 2013
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I am not a Dalek

A 17 year old Brit who loves all the stereotypical things like Tea and Doctor Who. I'm original. Definitely.


Sequel to Trapped
Rainbow Dash and Soarin' are both out of the hospital and have one month to spare before Soarin' has to return to his duties as a Wonderbolt. Will the traumatic events which occurred not even a week ago come between both ponies and their dreams?

Edited by the brill Time Pony Victorious!

Again, image from an episode until I have time to create my own!

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 348 )

My two favourite stories so far, this one and Trapped!! :pinkiehappy: :heart:

2571900 Aww thank you for all your support! *hugs* Hopefully this will be accepted in submission soon! :pinkiesad2: I will make a blog post when it's live! :pinkiehappy:

Really great. :twilightsmile:

Can't wait for chapter two!

2571923 Waiiitt I am so confused, so it has been accepted? XD Ah, I'm a derp then :derpytongue2: But yeah, I shall try get it up soon! I'm really excited about this! :pinkiehappy:

2571932 Well I got to read the first chapter.

So I guess...? Lol :rainbowlaugh:

2571944 But... Ah... It still says it's in queue, but then it doesn't but it isn't on the front page and gahhh! Guess we'll wait and see then :pinkiesad2: That is confuzzling :rainbowlaugh:

2571949 Yes it is... :applejackconfused:

My iPad must have the power to view unpublished stories! :pinkiegasp:

2571965 Indeed! What is this sorcery! :pinkiegasp:


Think of all the stories I can read... muwhahaha!

2571988 Indeed! You have the power! :pinkiesad2:

2571994 Heh...

Something tells me this is Discord's fault. :trollestia:

Heehee it's really good :pinkiehappy: I can't wait to read more! I predict a wedding! :rainbowkiss:

2572026 I am so confused guys! I haven't gotten a message to say that this has been accepted, and it doesn't have a yellow button to say "revoke submission" like my other stories do... What is this?! How can you all read this? God, I am such a derp but I am genuinely confused... :rainbowwild:

I have no idea it doesn't show up in your stories thing either :applejackunsure:

2572056 Blurghhh Okay, maybe it's in the queue and you can all see it because I gave you the link? If it doesn't get accepted in the next few days though I'm gonna have to retry :rainbowwild:

YESYESYESYES! Alright let me read this.... *le start reading*


2572319 (still don't understand how everyone can see this, but meh xD) Anyway, glad you like it, hopefully that will help you forgive me for lack of updates this week! I have two massive English exams next week! :rainbowwild:

2572325 ohh~ EXAMS FLIPPING SUCK. all of mine are in two weeks (o.e)t
but your welcome! and i can't wait to read more! :moustache:

2572347 I have mine next week then I have a break, then exams again then I have the death week where I have two exams in one day then one exam every other day -.- It's horrible! Good luck in your exams and stay tuned for the next chapter! :pinkiehappy:

Nothin' could go wrong? Well, with the thing ive learned from Trapped is that everything is going to go wrong... You are so predictible xD

Guys! It has now officially been approved, I don't understand what went on earlier but hey, you all got a sneak preview of it so, WIN :raritywink:

Nothing could go wrong.

Famous last words

2572431 Gosh, guys! Why do you all think I'm so predictable... like really... :rainbowwild:

Mm, sequel already! Looking forward to this, you're fast becoming one of my fave writers with your first-person perspectives!

Eighth paragraph down...

Rainbow Dash is the pony that was see as tomcoltish and athletic,

I'm assuming you meant seen?:unsuresweetie:

Really like this quote about falling in love.:twilightsmile:

...the same way you’d fall asleep. Slowly, then all at once.


hurry i know have a life but i no wana wait! (this is the girl who hates love stories lol)

2573227 Ah! That really is an honour considering you're my fave author on here!
And, not many people write present tense first-person fics, I find it so much easier though!

2573654 Oh yes, thank you!
Also, I love that quote too, it's from my favourite novel "The Fault in Our Stars" by John Green! :pinkiehappy:

2574340 Hopefully there will be an update tomorrow, since it is like 10pm for me now :unsuresweetie:


You do them well!

And fave author? No way, you flatter me! :raritywink:

2577370 Aww thank you!
Your stories are amazing! :pinkiehappy: Like I've said before, it is very very hard to find a good Soarin'Dash fic, yours is way above my standards! I am in love with your work! :pinkiehappy:(I sound like a creeper... Whoops...) :twilightsheepish:


omg, I have my own creeper! I've dreamed of this day ever since I wanted to write! :heart:

2577397 Aww! Well it's an honour to be the one to fulfill your dream for you :raritywink:

I haven't even started Trapped yet :rainbowlaugh:

2577501 Ahh sorry! :rainbowwild: Good luck! :pinkiesad2: My chapters are fairly short, so you should be okay? :twilightblush:

2577516 Might read it soon, wanna finish Cuatro and the next chapter of Caring for a Changeling

2577620 Aha, okay! Don't worry about it! :pinkiehappy: Take your time, it'll always be there when you're ready to read it! I hope you enjoy it and let me know what you think when you do get around to reading it! :twilightblush:

fff, dat cliffhanger!

Time for Soarin to prove just how fast he can be, I suppose!


What’s happening to me? I’m turning into Rarity!

I laughed at this. it's precisely how I picture Rarity!

2577774 Told ya I'd get revenge! :pinkiecrazy:
But what if he's not fast enough?! :pinkiegasp:

And ahaa :raritywink: It's exactly how I picture her too! :twilightblush: Poor Rarity, always getting hated on coz shes a girly girl :raritywink: I need to include her more since I talk a bit like her so it'd be easy to characterise her dialogue! :twilightblush:


The show itself needs more examples of Rarity's influence over stallions!

Certain fanfics, too!

2577809 Indeed, the show needs more romance, I mean come on, the only real romance is Cadance and Shining Armour! We could do with some pony else finding the love of their life! :twilightblush: (It would most likely be Rarity to be honest so you know, its a win win!)

How come I cannot read this but everyone else can? :flutterrage:

ahhhhh!....ahhhhh!....ahhhhh!....ahhhhhhhhhhhhhHHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOO [OMIGOSH YES!] <- NU! :derpyderp1: omigawd what is wrong with me...or... you lol

“You can bake pie?” I stare at Soarin’, gobsmacked.

I lost it! She is just like me when i found out that my mother accully knows how to play video games xD

2578372 I actually don't know? It has gone officially live so you should be able to see it? Let me know if you're still having problems and I will see what I can do! :unsuresweetie:

2580553 Ahaa Cliffhangers ftw!

2580853 Indeed! Many people seem to shock us :rainbowwild:


Oh wait, I can finally see it! Now I can read!


2581379 Ah, that's good then! At least nothing is wrong with my account :twilightblush:

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