• Member Since 25th Apr, 2013
  • offline last seen Nov 11th, 2021

lionaxel


So you dare to confront me, the Fiery Lion? Ha! May luck come to you if you ever intend on leaving this place unharmed.

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Applejack is forced to play a "game". She willingly accepts but while "playing" she kills Rainbow Dash. Now Rainbow Dash is gone and so is the Element of Loyalty. The other four (Twilight, Pinkie, Fluttershy, and Rarity) are starting to feel a bit strange. However, the "games" must continue and, as Applejack starts to feel not herself, she must find a way to save the other elements and somehow bring Rainbow back, if its even possible.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 11 )

We are very interested in thy plot line, We are also eager for the competition to get underway.
Thou hast talent hoof servant - keep writing.

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Are you Scared? I'm not following. Clarify, please.

Um you shifted from third person to first person. Just sayin'.

ah like it cant wait to see what happens :derpyderp1:

I'm gonna fave and follow for some more! It's a great story so far, though you did switch from 3rd person to 1st person. Other than that, Wonderful job on it! :pinkiehappy:

Thanks guys for catching that error! I'll fix it as soon as I can.

i like the out come of the story id love whats happens next :rainbowkiss:

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