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Dimitri_Domovoi


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Three comrades are in the middle of a war on Earth when three equines appear in the midst of battle. Can the warriors get the mares out and home in one piece? And what are the mares' first impressions of these seemingly dangerous creatures?

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so this is a remake? Not that I'm complaining or anything.

Just wandering.

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it is a re-launch of my own story.

I was supposed to read this a long time ago... but then I didn't cause I procrastinate things. I will read this, starting tonight.

Don't know how they're there, or why they're there, but who cares. Oh maybe instead of him jacking up a 60ton tank (Which is awesomely cool and everything) why not have him... say, yank up on the main cannon and seize it into place by hyper extending the barrel upwards?
Dunno, just my thoughts.:duck:

5018469 I was using the tank as more of a tool to give a feel of how large he is (cause I was kind of shit at describing appearance). I've been coming back every now and than to fix this story here and there.

Man i liked that story i give mad props on it and thats all for now :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :derpytongue2:

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