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Stark Trist


Myka the Programmer, Game Designer, Trans Girl, Amateur Reader/Writer. Checkout my video game, Byte Lynx, on Steam!

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From a young age, Trixie Lulamoon dreamed of becoming a world-famous magician. In her quest to become famous she must grow and become a powerful and skilled mage. But as with any quest, things never go as planned.

Special thanks to Tales19 for editing!

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 9 )
Comment posted by Mr Stargazer deleted Aug 16th, 2013
Comment posted by Stark Trist deleted Aug 16th, 2013

You keep using the word 'fillies' when referring to snips and snails. 'Filly' is a term for a young female. You want to either be using 'colt' (young male) or 'foal' (young pony).

Comment posted by Stark Trist deleted Oct 21st, 2013
Comment posted by Stark Trist deleted Oct 21st, 2013

My butt grew and began to grumble in anticipation for its discharge. Trixie, although proud of her ability to force a butt into existence, was ashamed at its size. Butts were supposed to dwarf creatures, not the other way around.

:rainbowhuh: I think you have a rather severe typo going on here. (Also, principle is something you uphold, or get on an investment, but your principal is the one who was in charge of a school)

That was a cute chapter.
Nice to see Trixie's origins, and even though it sucked that her parents left her, the day was redeemed because of, who in my opinion are the best people ever, a Magician. So :yay:
I'm really liking this story.
Good job.:twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Stark Trist deleted Feb 13th, 2020
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