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The Equestrian Gentlecolt


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Renting the supposedly-haunted "Apartment 13" may not have been the best idea, but it has certainly been the most interesting. David Clarkston and Key Lime are the most unlikely of roommates, but they're united by two common threads: they both needed a place to stay, and they both needed a friend.

A/N: This is a work of random inspiration one evening. I have no idea where it came from. Marked "On Hiatus" because I make no promises that I'll continue it, but it seemed interesting enough to be worth sharing.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 27 )

Interesting. I would really like to see how this turns out. Please keep writing.

That was remarkably interesting and well written.
Despite the bizarre nature of the meeting, human x pony companionship stories are my biggest weakness.
Not sure where the story could go from here...
Maybe you could get a team of writers together like they do on sitcoms to hash out story lines and dialogue?

very nice story, it's seems well done and i'd like to see how it turns out later

I know you said this was on hiatus, and that you may not continue it. I'm tracking it anyway, because a man can dream, can't he?

I like it. Very well written, easy flowing and fun. I'll pay you an imaginary million dollar bill to keep writing it. (warning: imaginary currencies in impossibly high denominations are not usable as cash, and may result in arrest if you try to actually spend it).

Wut. This promises to be hilarious, if you can do it right. Tracking.

Random inspiration strikes again. Not as long as I'd envision a real "episode" being, but too much fun not to share.

I've never tracked a story that was on hiatus before. Here's to hoping you find more random inspiration!

I second that hope, this is pretty entertaining.

Gemstones seem pretty common in Equestria....................

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Incredibly common - they're more of a decoration and a food item for dragons than anything of value, it seems like. That was a big part of the reason that the thought of them possibly being valuable on Earth never even crossed her mind. The only reason she made the connection with gold was because she was trying to think of ways to turn her money into his. That's my story, and I'm sticking to it. :scootangel:

Hee. Fun little episode. More a vignette? Somewhere between.

Not sure you needed to elaborate sexuality (I personally prefer universally bisexual Equestria), since species difference is a common sense (lacking in this fandom?) enough reason to avoid the idea of interspecies romance.

Also ponies have hair, not fur.

Still loving how cute this story is and hoping to read more in the future!

This is quite entertaining. I like the concept. I hope to get to see more in the future.

Man! This is sweet, i like this! :pinkiehappy: Can't wait to read more! :twilightsmile:

This is almost sickeningly cute.

Though I could see her being terrified by the internet.

I like. :twilightsmile:

Tracking in hopes of an eventual update.

Personally, if I were Dave I'd probably try to get some scientists over to study the whole "my apartment exists in two worlds simultaneously and my roommate is an alien pastel-colored unicorn pony that can use magic" thing, assuming they could interact with Lime the way that Dave can anyway.

No. NO! Why did the chapter have to end? I need moar! Why would you do this to me?!
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Faveing despite the story being on haiatus. Pretty amusing/interesting/well written so far!

I don't know why he isn't more weirded out, but I like that you didn't spend too much time on that. (It is understandable she isn't - Equestria is a world with many different sentient species, so ponies are mentally adjusted to their possibility.)

I hope you continue this at some point. It was a nice story and I'd like to see more of it. :moustache:

The idea isn't much original, but the format and style make this story so deliciously worth the reading !
Please, find more inspiration to strike yourself with !

I'm still holding out hope!

Lime is cute wanna snuggle her and hug her and I want more of this! Like and faved.

I love this so far but since it has 0 dislikes i can't help but tease sooo....*clicks thumbsdown*

How does the door work, is it a wormhole?
Find out next time!

Note to self.

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