This story is a sequel to Maybe once you...
Part 32 in the Maybe series.... It's been a few days since the events of Canterlot, the last few days have been nothing but memory spells and sleep. It's just another sleepy day for you until an unexpected requested is made for Twilight.
To my old readers, I welcome you to the continuation of the maybe series new arc of the , hope you enjoy it.
To new readers even thought I suggest starting at an earlier part, you might be able to start here if you would keep an open mind but I suggestion starting earlier.
Chapters (8)
*usual preread stuff* ^^
yay
Uh oh
Well that can't be good,,,
.............. This won't end well.
yay
what will happen next???
SHIT('
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was not expecting this
I am forever Cheesy Heart....
nice change up in the story also Violet doing frost magic....Heck ya
Now post up part 33 already...We all know you can write a 13k worded story in a few days so just do it already !
ssnap...snap snap...snapsnapsnapsnapsnapsnapSNAP!
Shit..........."..."
snp
sashnbnnkmjnmj snap!
thats what im talking about
XD, best joke by poison joke ever!!!
Who knew that all she needed to use her magic was to run into a wall
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lol throw all the fillys !
But no, human magic (green
) is generated from strong emotion (like said in part 5-32) So it was the pain from the hit that did it.
Well...Fuck
Let's hope she ends up someplace good, like with Twilight, Celestia, or one of the mane 6
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So it's not that she needed to run into a wall, it's that she needed to get hurt in some way?
I don't think that's much better
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Oh well at least there was a cheesy heart in this one.
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And baby magic mischiefz
hmpf... today there a couple of absent comas in the direct speach like:
etc.
lil trick: Comas seperate thought elements in direct speach.
and there are a couple, as far as I saw; three, question marks with should be something else, like a technical interobang -> "!?" <- for exemple:
Nothing to say about the Storyline ^^ good work.
owwww.... that must have hurt... poor lil violet.
hmpf I had something I was going to criticise... but i have forgotten what it was... lol...
anyhoofs, good one ^^
oh ha... that's not the best possible thing...
Anyways, this time there is nothing to criticise as far as i remember right now. ^^
Video games, well... thats it... Equestria is finally corrupted... time to take off... *steps in his pink spaceship of madness and locks coordinates on Insania "UP UP AND AWAY!!!"*...
Anyways that will be... interesting.
So nothing to say here what i didn't already had said. ^^
nothing to say, good work ^^
Magic for Derpy's X'D ;D
*laughts like hell* DEAR that was freaking good!!! LOL.... just lol
really good work here ^^ really good work... ^^
Just. To. Good.
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So so good... ^^
Really great job on this one ^^
So there is something:
Fatty did I just not realized it before, or do you used this time very few comas?
*bit confused*
anyhoofs, I love it ^^... Violet YEY!!!
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Well I wrote two parts for this one and this one (the first) was done in one night so ya I didn't get time to go over this one (mainly because I was to lazy to re-read and add the comas). Sad but true, hope you all enjoyed this part I figured its been a while since we had a Rainbow x guy part so it was a nice change.
lol hopefully the goodness of this one will let the next part slide by,
2567956 ah, that explain's it ^^
Don't you have to know where your teleporting to? and violet has never been there so how could she teleport there?
Where does Magic for Derpy's come from? Its everywhere.
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Secrets are magic...but it's explained in a side story.
3157093 OK what's the side story?
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All side stories are posted on the left of my page at the top. Magic for Derpys is the one with SmartyPants
Poor! Spike