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GeodesicDragon


[NOW RETIRED FROM WRITING] I'm a Scotsman who liked to write stories, not all of which were of the self-insert variety.

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Ace has snapped, and now Doctor Robo terrorises Equestria in his bid to reform the world in his own image. Meanwhile, sinister forces are working behind the scenes and taking advantage of the chaos. What will become of Geo and Twilight, and all that they hold dear?

AUTHOR'S NOTES

This story was once known as Part Seven of the canon Geoverse, but it was declared non-canon due to a lack of updates — as well as being requested by some readers.

Co-written with Crimson Star.

Rated Teen for language and violence (in later chapters).

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 118 )

Welp, he's had a good run. But it's time to put Ace down.

*Grabs shotgun*

*spits soda out* OMG its here! :heart:
You owe me a new screen

I was just thinking, I wonder when the next installment of the geoverse is coming out?

I check and find you've put a blog up about putting this out.

I check and find that it had been submitted today.

I read it.

I love it already.

Aww ohno whats going to happen to ace's and pinkie's relationship?:pinkiesad2::fluttercry:

YES. HELL YES. FUCK YES. ALL THE YES! Just.... YES!:pinkiecrazy:

Awsome I can't waite for more I realy like this new Geo story so far. Also I don't know why but wiht this new mad Ace it's looks like he is Dr.Ivo "Eggman" Robotnick and when he started up his ship and fireed the heat beamy I hade this song in my head the hole time:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QXbOjsHDXoc&list=PLA942BF58F8579263

I think I am the only one ho have the Eggman vibe from him so far but I realy like Eggman but I do wonder hos voice coud be thet misterious voice? Coud be a failed lich unicorn or the remains of a mad alicorn essence or somebody completly different oooooh I can't waite to be revaled. :raritystarry:

FUCK YES THANK YOU

Well, that's about what I expected from this. Honestly, going theory for me is something out of the current MLP COmic, to those who know what I'm talking about.

...now that said, I have NO IDEA how this is going to go down. As it is, Pinkie may be the linch-pin to all this. ...on the other hand, the way this has gone, she might wind up making it worse, which in my mind makes sense all too easily.

Now, here's the thing. How in the heck could they stop Ace? Elements won't work, he'll have a contingency for that. Further, brute strength MIGHT be enough if everypony comes down on him at once, but likely he'll have a plan for that. Top it all off, the dude had near a year of brooding, slipping into insanity and this whole thing to fortify his already rather substantial forces...so that said, how in the heck do you compete with an army that's never tired, lethal, and worst of all, has no scruples or morals?

As is, I have my doubts about this ending well for anypony, much less the Main cast and Pinky and Ace especially. Maybe I'm just a downer, but with the way these stories have been...this one will take us further down the path of Despair than ever, and there won't be any going back for some.

Well done, and I look forward to more, kinda have to, I NEED to know what happens next!

I get the feeling whatever possessed Luna and made her Nightmare Moon has done the same to Ace. And don't give me those nightmare things from the comics, those are complete bullshit. It was Luna being lonely and messing with dark magic. After the modern day element blast, that entity became ethereal in a void between life and death. It saw Ace's self-loathing and used him. This is my headcannon.

Sorry pinkie, but there's a good chance that ace is gone for good.

Now be a good mare and hold still while I call in the Airstrike.

Just got in from work at 2AM. Absolutely knackered...I think I'll just...

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HOLY CRAP! THE NEXT STORY IS UP! *reads*

I loves it! :pinkiehappy:

Wow, Geo really is a kind king, can we give him some wings and some magic? I think he more than earn them. Hell something tell me that Twilight is or will be working in some immortality spell, she has enough scars to start planning that sort of things, something tells me she will not let him go again

Will you incorporate the canon Season 4 when it comes out, or will this be completely original fiction? Just to mentally prepare myself for this...whatever it is, be it interwoven with Season 4, or original. Either way, it will be an epic to end all epics, as the predecessors to this have shown in spades. Anyways, on a side note, this has filled my fimfic rant quota for the day.

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Here's something that will really mess with your heads.

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Good. I was scared to read this at first.

nothing starts a story better than setting ponyville on fire.

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here's a good question:

will Crimson Star ever finish his f:yay:king story?!

I always knew Ace was one lab accident away from becoming a mad scientist. The really smart ones usually are.

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I'm stuck on the Epilogue, but I will finish it.

no "dark" and no "tragedy" tag ? Well, that reassures me then :twilightsmile:

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That's cool bro. just take your sweet-ass time making it :twilightsmile:

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I can't help but feel you were annoyed by making this statement...

PLEASE DON'T UNFOLLOW ME! :raritycry:

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its weird how i never followed you to begin with, but now you gain another one. :derpytongue2:

2722232 The line bethwen genius and madman is realy small my friend.

One thing I noticed, tandem means one after the other, I assume you meant they threw the beam together which is working in concert. Great prologue, this is looking really interesting.

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That's my fault.

I mistook Tandem for Simultaneously.

wait only geo is there. what about john where was he when this happen? still awesome chapter

Well.................................fuck. Ace just went off the deep end!

2717790 I got a sniper rifle, a shotgun, a M4A1, and a USP. When do we leave?

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I think we know where Ace falls on Harvey Dent's dichotomy:

2760876 I've got an Airsoft USP, but it's gas powered and can kill someone with an eye shot. Can I come?

2850303 That's what all mine are as well, the M4 and USP being gas. I also have an P90 AEG now!!

2852426 Awesome! I had a P90 once, but I traded it for an M1911. Also, I have a Beretta M9, a Walther, and the USP.

Comment posted by BigMacsPenis deleted Jul 11th, 2013

Give us more Season of Terror, Geo!

I listened to radioactive by imagine dragons while reading this
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=KIW_Ca8OWTo

Awsome a new chapter! Can't waite how will this new story will turn out.

Ooooh...the plot thickens...yes Geo...I said plot :pinkiehappy:

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And you just know that somehow, this will end with Geo and Twi doing the horizontal mambo. It is a Geoverse fic, after all. :trollestia:

gasp, the robot has influenced him!:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:

I'm glad this is finally here, but I'm afraid it's too late for me.
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All the waiting... it was too much to handle.

"When you're rife with devastation, there's a simple explanation, you're a toymaker's creation trapped inside a crystal ball."

Is this taking place in the Friendship is Witchcraft universe? You quoted The Gypsy Bard. If so, that is actually kinda cool. If not, that is one crazy coincidence, but then again, I don't believe in coincidences. Still a good chapter overall.

Comment posted by Hypersonic deleted Aug 16th, 2013

Ace could get so obsessed with power that he could go biological mutation...

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May god have mercy on our souls...

... so there is something in his head. Just give him a really hard bitch slap, you know for some cognitive recalibration.

Oh and to your author's notes... Luky424 says: GET BACK TO WRITING YOUR DAMN STORY CRIMSON!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::twilightangry2::twilightangry2:

Since no one else has said it i will...Nightmare Ace.:pinkiecrazy:

I mean it's trying to convince him he isn't loved, just like how Luna felt, and if we go by what Twilight said, Luna must have been possessed by something because if she was just crazy the elements would have destroyed her.

And the plot thickens...ooooohhhhh.....

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