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What the hell did I just read and why do I like it?
~Skeeter The Lurker
Seems the 'sexually-frustrated non-student' is about to remove one of her titles... oh dear.
Read latering since, well... hell, I can't miss out on this. Good luck, miles! And remember, clop's an artform!
Yeeees
That was pretty fun
Sugarcube Corner
not Sugar Cube Corner.
Hoped there would be a tad more story. Don't know why. I skimmed most of it, though. I like Friendship Student better.
So do this mean Twilight finally got the satisfaction she wanted? Or is she still going to be a grouchy virgin moaning about she never gets any?
Crapgottafinishreadingmostofthefirststory... I never got to it until now.
I suppose is somewhat explains what Applejack said in that hiatus chapter. At the moment, she seems to have gotten the worst of it from Twilight. Either that or she was trying to get Rainbow all to herself in any future friendship orgies. On the other hand, it looks like Rainbow and Pinkie got off the easiest from Twilight... actually, I take it back. They didn't get off at all from Twilight. It just goes to show, this Twilight really is a selfish fuck.
And with that, a happy (early?) one-year anniversary, miles!
Outstanding!
And finally Twi had sex!
Here´s to hope she suddenly becomes a nice and sweet mare which will frak out her "friends" once they see her again. xD
Now do a FUTATWI version! I pay in up-votes!
beautiful amazing A+ etc
would read again
and again
and maybe again
Rarely, I like lesbian stuff. But this one, I like.
2681075Your clop hath received praise by the biologically-correct Midnight Dancer!
Bravo!
2681139 :3 Huzzah!
Royal orgy anyone?
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Cadance said no.
Celestia said hell no.
And Luna said keep dreaming. She was especially adamant about that.
Very nice, an unfortunate lack of Spike though, considering how much Twilight is a fan of the tongue.
2681583 Fax Machine isn't worthy of such an honor!
Guess what, this story got featured.
2680524 Fixed. Surprised that got past my pre-reader. He's usually flawless with that stuff.
2681904 I'd have changed it to "Unicron" and waited to see how long it took people to notice ;)
*See's title without before seeing author*
Miles, what the hell have you done? And will I like it? And who the hell am I?
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Well said
WOOHOO!
Yeah! THAT was awesome!
I told myself I had to read this because it is related to your letters series. Now that I have, all I can say is that your warning was accurate. There was a lot of clop...
WOOO Nice story, hilarious premise too, loved the AppleDash ending
That... was abrasive, cheap, and of average quality even for a clop fic. Granted, I don't believe it should be damned to the eternal depths of tartarus, but it has no business in the feature box. I'm disappointed in this.
Hopefully this'll make miss element of bitchery calm down. Who'm I kidding, I love bitchy, racist Twi.
2683557 My sincerest apologies that something in the feature box did not immensely satisfy you. If you want super high-quality elitist douchbaggery featured only, Equestria Daily is thadda' way.
Next.
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I make a point to at least tell someone why I don't like their fic when I down vote it. I apologize if you are offended. If it was an exceptional clop fic, I'd have just went with it. This one, however, seemed to be lacking in build up and the characters were, as I said, abrasive. It relied heavily on sex alone and a few felt like you tried to include a few "stereo-types" that ended up either too tame or just obnoxious.
I suppose I should have left a bit of advice on how to improve but I hadn't considered it at the time. That's my bad I suppose.
Be-lated advice: Consider emotional settings. Rape/forced sex tends to play more into the darker, greedy side of people while shipping/consensual sex tends to play to the lighter, loving side. It felt like you just couldn't make up your mind and it ended up disrupting the focus of the story.
To be honest im not surprised more and more i see pinkie amd rarity having some crimle conections. I mean with rarity in the fashion indosty (witch in realy life has many ties to organised crime) and how pinkie knows everypony and everything about everypony in town it wouldint be a far strech to say that those 2 are not 100% law biding ponys.
2683714 Have you read my parody Letters From A Disgruntled Friendship Student? This is a spinoff of that, and the only reason it was not posted in that story is because it is rated Teen.
Yes, as a standalone story, I can understand your criticisms, but this was a 30-day writing challenge that I gave myself for the 1-year anniversary of Letters.
2683662 well, you get them in all types
2683733 Yes I suppose so. I don't believe the featured box should be reserved for "the best". Readers of fan fiction are looking for all kinds of things, and so less skilled writers, or to writers who don't deliver a carefully planned epic every single time, exposure is one of many things that can push them to be better.
If the Featured Box only accepted the best, who decides the best? If you answer that question, then you begin down a slippery slope, and then before you know it this site is as bad at fan fiction as Equestria Daily.
I for one am very glad the feature box is automated.
2683756. ..........for that amazing comment , you get a follow!! Yes, it is quite good that the featured box is automated, because it shows that FIMFiction for now, still remains a democracy.
2683732
Actually, no, though I marked it as a read later. It's just that I also have mark over 80 something other stories and still haven't caught up on all my tracking updates.
2683837 Heh. I actually have very few stories on my 'Read Later' list that I intend to read later.
No, that list is mostly for stories that I have already read that I don't want appearing on my favorites list.
2683756
It's just that some people will off load a bunch of cheap clop and make 5 features a day with minimal effort and when you get a rep for clop, that's what you are watched for. Clop. Clop breeds clop and then more clop and all of it is geared towards cheap features and views that block at least 2 or 3 new writers from getting featured simply because clop is all over the place. it gets out of hand sometimes and then you get a mix of clop and guys who already have a massive fan base.
2683848
I'm thinking of starting a library group for just that purpose.
2683861I don't know the inner workings of the feature box. But I think Sexcapades is the longest time I've ever had a story of mine featured. Most of the time it's only up there for an hour or two. Sexcapades has been up there for more than half a day. That's definitely a first for me.
I initially became known for The Cupcake Chronicles. An alternate ending to Cupcakes that took a rather sudden turn towards Appledash. It wasn't clop, but more towards erotica.
Then I became known for the raunchy, risque comedy of Letters From A Disgruntled Friendship Student. The hits I got from it soon overtook the numbers I was getting from Chronicles, and is currently the most popular thing I have ever posted online.
Sexcapades was merely a 30-day attempt to combine the two; clop with a background, and comedy.
2683880 I've had a couple hit feature since the new system. I can tell you if you get on in first hour you're looking at about 72 hours before your heat dies enough to push you out of slot 7
So they all fall for Twilight McBitchyprance, and still give no thought to the guy who actually deserves sex? Before you know it, I'm gonna be equally disgusted with all six of them.
2681598 You're absolutely right! He is entitled to a much greater honor: banging a decent mare.
2681583
Getting a little tired of you guys moaning about stories or chapters that don't contain Spike. He has many fanfictions devoted solely to him, and more than enough clopfics of his own. Stop complaining, he gets more tail than Big Mac does in fic-weight. That's saying something.
Does this mean that in season 4 Twilight will be less of a bitch? If Twinkie is going to be canon in the story I think Twilight can still be saved...
2684735 I'm not sure. As of now, all this is filler. I'm not planning on the Hiatus chapters, Anniversary chapters, or Sexcapades to have any impact on Season 4. We'll see.
This was really good, well written clop is rare, and this is an example.
I feel the need to point out the two things I really disliked about it though, which were:
1. The word snatch
2. The use of tentacles
These are both purely personal issues and I'm sure other people were fine with them, but they were disgusting negatives that only stood out so much because the rest of the story was so careful and cleanly written.
Anyways, good work!
2680446
TWIIILIIIIIGHT!!!!
2683714
Dude, The build up you were looking for is in the other fic, "Letters from a Disgruntled Friendship Student." This was just a mature spin off, calm down. Also, Feature box is ruled by number of views.