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It started out with Pinkie Pie trying to make the perfect dessert with Applejack. It ended with the most complicated sort of situation a mare could have with her friend.
Edited by Kitsunehero.
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Hmmm.... ApplePie? Not bad.
~Skeeter The Lurker
The three letter word that Applejack wrote is pug.
Its not dessert if you eat it first.
nightheart like. very good.
i dam fuck love it
I have a 7 letter word for this perfect story.
AMAZING.
Genius!!!!
It's kinda sweet.
This was great. Love seeing how Pinkie gets shipped with the others. Always makes for an interesting and in this case adorable read.
I had really hoped that pinkie might actually face rejection from an outward attempt like that, and she might overcome rejection through friendship. But; alas, twas not so. (I might have to write something of the sort)
Wait! What was the dessert? Pink Apple Pie?
Horizontal Tango?
Roll in the apple?
WHY CAN'T I THINK OF 3 WORD APPLE RELATED DESSERT INNUENDOS?!
Not bad. Just needs a bit of editing for a few misplaced words here and there. Keep up the good work
YES!!!!!! FINALLY!
somepony else ships ApplePie!!!!!!! 
I'll have you know that Pink Lady apples make excellent Pies.
That. Was. Freaking. ADORABLE.
*Reads comments*
Apple Pie. Right...now I feel stupid for not figuring it out myself.
Cute.
Applejack made a complete change of heart awfully fast. From "What in tha fuck are you doin'?!" to "Bom chicka wow wow.".
Best part about responding to comments? I get to make very very stupid puns over and over again
2796069 Question: How many stories do you comment on in a day? All of them? I see you everywhere.
And thanks for the praise!
2797051 Exactly. That's why it was perfect.
2797189 I don't know. My ex's hips say otherwise.
2797300 Ug happy. Ug fire.
2798588 i fuck love u damn.
2799529 I was honestly thinking you were going to say magenta, but that works too!
2801008 Yes Pinkie is... except for that whole "I'm talking to myself" deal.
2801104 Well kinda thank you!
2802422 The secret is booze, too much free time, and lots and lots of pre-readers/editors who deal with me for whatever reason.
2802425 It is my life goal to ship Pinkie with every single pony in the main six. I hit 3 now. Only 2 to go!
2803306 It would make for a sensible premise. Basically, I would see it as Applejack saying "I'm mad, but we're cool," and Pinkie being happy somewhat quickly. Yet, this is a ship story, so SHIP THE PONIES!!!
2803539 Pinkie is going to be tasting some caramelized Apple empanada soon.
2804047 If a few misplaced words is the criticism that I get, then I am very much satisfied with how it turned out. Grammar is so minor compared to the content (in my book). The first can be fixed and looked past. The second makes a story not exist.
2804369 Baby, I eat and breathe ApplePie (actually, my OTP is RariPie, but to each their own).
2805085 I'm sure I could make a very sexual joke to this, but I am a man of class, and I would never stoop to that level.
2806980 I believe that Pinkie and Rarity are the most fun characters to write for. Strangely enough, they are also complete opposites
2808967 Like your face, sugar.
2811220 Excuse me, but I'm fairly certain that we established it was "Apple Pug."
2812757 Actually, it was more of a "WTF, bitch!?" to "Umm... maybe? Sorta? Let's try this..." The boom boom pow comes later.
2815564 Magenta? Really? Well then here you go.
MAGENTA!
If you're to ship her with every one of the main six. You have three down and three to go. Pinkie could totally date herself.
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2815872
Don't forget Luna and Celestia
Apple Pie...
You made a romantic pun, well written.
2815564 oh, really? my OTP is RariShy
As always i'm late to the party, but I'll comment anyways.
Hah, Apple Pie that's brilliant. Also I do agree Pinkie Pie was spot on in this story.
My goodness, but this is adorable! It's rare to get stories of my OTP, and rarer still to get them this well-written.
The narration style was very unique, and very Pinkie. A huge part of the charm to this story is in how Pinkie's unusual and roundabout way of thinking influenced how the story was told. It made it a whole lot of fun to read, no matter what was happening in the story.
Also, I loved how Pinkie was getting herself all psyched up to confess her feelings outright, and got distracted by an opportunity for a tickle attack. That was great for relieving some of the tension building there, and also very in-character.
The one thing that struck me as a little off was that Applejack's initial reaction seemed a little too harsh. I get that she was startled, and not really the sort to mince words, so it makes sense that she might react poorly, but even so, that scene felt like it leaned a bit too far in that direction, especially considering the fact that once she'd had time to cool off, Applejack was okay with giving it a shot.
Aw, but my nitpicking isn't fooling anyone. It's Apple Pie! Well-written Apple Pie! Have a like, a favorite, and a big goofy grin!
2804369 Are you aware there is an Apple Pie group? I'm the founder, and we do weekly fun stuff like caption games and things.
/shameless obligatory group plug
2821352 no but i'll be sure to check out the group
ApplePie isn't my OTP, RariShy is, but i do ship ApplePie :) i know the feeling when your favourite ship isn't nearly popular enough 
Have you seen this image good sir? Because it was all that was going through my mind during the 'tickle attack' scene.
Bravo! Before this fic, I never really saw Applejack and Pinkie Pie together! Now I can totally see the appeal! Haha... appeal... apple...
2815663 And henceforth, that shall be our battle cry!!!
2815872 I... may have a story that involves that that is 100% serious, and 0% comedy.
2819317 Can't stop this, babe.
2819891 Romantic puns are best puns. This is especially true when they also involve food.
2820934 Was never a fan of that ship. I just feel it's too... what's the word... weird? Hmm...
2821107 I love writing Pinkie Pie. I feel like as long as I'm only a little random, I'll be a-okay!
2821352 I hear you on your point, but allow me to counterpoint it. Imagine if a male (assuming you are also male and heterosexual) friend of yours just, out of the blue, started making out with you. Not going to lie, I'd react either in stunned shock, or short-term rage. Either way, the shock would look like anger. Now, I will say that it would take more than a few hours for me to go along with the idea, but hey... story.
2824132 You are talking to a man who ships Pinkie and Rarity. Good luck there.
2831287 Nope! That definitely wasn't the image that inspired this entire story at all. Nope!
I would really like to see that story serious or silly, and since you've proclaimed it now.
MAGENTA
2831521>>2831942 let me make the battle cry better.
MAGENTA!
There we go!
2831521 My favorite romance is a dangerous one.
Example: Pinkie dates sentient cactus that is also trying to kill her.
2831521 D: weird? ya think it's weird?
ah well. to each their own. do you ship anything Fluttershy?
"Princess Celestia and Luna were lucky those apples weren't sentient enough to govern a nation, for if they were, the two would be in an unemployment line somewhere."
Implying the apples are to some degree sentient. Do they feel pain or fear when bucked from the tree? Agony when sliced, peeled or eaten? Very curious.
Don't change it, I like to believe that the apples have opinions!
great work, I do like your very pinkie style of thought in your writing. Keep up the good work and keep writing.
Really really good. I liked it a lot!
2831942>>2833127 I hope this becomes a thing... I think. Either that, or I'm scared.
2833681 My old OTP was FlutterDash, and it still holds a soft spot in my heart. That, and FlutterBunny...
2840766 Let us all take a moment of silence to remember the Apple Massacre last Cider Season.
2845742 Thank you! I appreciate it, and so does Pinkie.
2846347 Shut yo fut, you little rut!
2863059 ...Where does this say it is a multi-chapter story? It says complete...
2886288 And I like you a lot... LICK
2886424 Yay licks! But seriously, I really like your style, both this one and "Lost Princess" were very good and enjoyable. I hope to see more from you.
2886424 i see
2886424 I did it on a couple other stories so I think it will become a thing
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Oh damn Whoops!~