Graduate student who loves writing and generally being creative ^_^
Countless years had passed since King Sombra started haunting the Crystal Empire. The citizens were listless, forgetful; but when the mane 6 started investigating, truths were uncovered that shook their entire world. Rarity is at the center of it all, as she and her friends try to balance justice with duty and compassion. Political intrigue, magic, romance, and darkness cloaks them all.
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This is an interesting concept, though not explaining much. I'll keep my eye on this to see where it goes.
Explaining the magical aura of the ponies as ki is interesting, though. Something you don't usually see. I'm also interested in that you got Luna's personality down pretty alright. I hold that in high regard.
Nice! I'm looking forward to your future stories
Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.
I love it so far! Keep it up!
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If she can get it accepted on EQD, fine. They are really strict about what goes up. Personally, I am of the opinion they've got some mighty good ganja in dat joint.
Intriguing. Following!
2942133 Thanks cousin!
I'm really enjoying this, I can't wait to read more!
2942111 What is ganja?
I KNEW YOU WEREN'T DEAD!!!
I'm always on the market for a good story with Rarity and King Sombra at top billing, thank you for continuing this.
Indeed.
Is Rarity going to become Sombra's queen?
5072242 You'll just have to keep reading...
Will there be a new chapter soon. Please be soon because I really like this coupling.
Will we being seeing more of Sombra soon?
5219420 I'm not going to rush this story, but he will make an appearance. He is one of the main characters in my story, but it takes time to write well, and I'm doing this story for NaNoWriMo. There's going to be a lot of plot going on, and I've given hints here are there. You just need to keep reading. I hope you do. Thank you for your comment.
This is getting go.I hope you do another chapter soon.
Only theory I have, is that things are on the downward spiral, and Rarity will be right at the heart of the storm(though I believe most people probably figured that already.)
Please, please if you can, continue this story. It shows so much promise!