Pinkamena Diane Pie, also known as Pinkie Pie to her friends, is the most party-loving and most sweet-loving pony in Ponyville. But underground, she is most known for her killing spree of over 100 ponies and baking them into delicious sweeties. Now she is not alone as a new underground baker comes and sets the records almost close to hers. What new alliance can be found with these Demon Bakers and how will it affect their business when trying to rule the sweeties of Equestria?
The cover art is not mine but I like it so give credit to the artist if you know him/her :D
Chapters (6)
interesting... I look forward to seeing where this goes
For your first fic, this is pretty good
, though I'd advise getting an editor.
I might be able to edit, if you want.
Well, I'd like to see how they handle Pat...
You know what would be an interesting plot-twist?
Twilight suddenly comes in.
The match-up would be complete.
If they kill Patt...
I like it! Needs editing due to spelling mistakes and tense errors though.
This is an amazing story!
And Demon's Garden is a name that intrigues me. 
Give me MOAR! 
I'll give this a read! I'll like it and fav it just in case.
One would assume that the picking on would be the motive for Scoutker to break loose.
But something so mundane can't be the cause.
While it is short and late, it's not too shabby. Just try to catch on and keep up the good work Creepy!
Demon's Garden!
Sorry I'm taking so long guys. Chapter 4 is on the way and 5 is in progress atm. Still i'm thankful for you for y'all to read my story. If anyone doesn't mind helping me edit this story, Let me know
Now, back to writing darkness 
Another chapter!
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P.S. FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!
Man, Creepy, you REAAAALLLLY need that editor.
Aside from that, we have a first glance at the powers present in this fic! I like the loud-mouthed kid Scoutker.
Oh, and I think some more describing of events might be in order. You're being a bit, just a bit, vague right now.
Pinkmina love~
Was wondering when the Wonderbolts and Surprise would make an appearance, it's about time.
Surprise makes an appearance! I hope she'll be something else than a complete Pinkie(mena) clone. That'd be dull, right?
I've got a strong feeling that a lot of shit is going to happen to her future ex doe
Overall, I still feel that there's potential in the storyline. Keep up and you may harness it!
I'm still up for being a basic-tier editor to get rid of some of those grammatical errors you keep making.
Mostly about was/were, their/they're/there, the likes. Ones that aren't a problem of spoken language.
Some weird additional words here and there, too, like "the" in random positions.
i love please make another chapter
cool so far.