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ThePoeticPitbull


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Lyra, tired of being cooped up with nothing to do, convinces Bon Bon to have a shopping spree with her. What will happen along the way? Read to find out.

Also, references.

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Lyra rolled her eyes. "Yeah. One day, maybe they'll make a movie from your [oh-so-daring/i] accomplishment."

Everything after this line is italicized because you didn't close out your tag properly. You might want to fix that.

Well this looks like it'll be funny, can't wait to read more of it.

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Thanks.
With any luck, this should be a decent story.
An ideal mark to reach would be...
10 chapters?
I'll see how it goes.

Love this story and eagerly waiting to see what happens next!

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