After months of pleading and begging, Rainbow Dash finally relents and agrees to go with Fluttershy to see the next Butterfly Migration - This time near the eastern oversea town of Canterbury. The shy Pegasus could never be happier.
Setting forth on a train, across the wild and rolling hills of Equestria on their journey over the sea
But as it turns out, the Migration becomes the last thing to cross their mind as the two pegasi are thrown astray into a dangerous land. And one small yellow Pegasus finds herself quickly out of her element.
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I love it I need MAOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awesome!
Is it just me, or does Fluttershy look like an Abra with a pink wig in that pic? Not that it's a bad pic; that's just something that popped out at me right away.
Curious.
I'll see where this goes.
~Skeeter The Lurker
You have my attention. Please continue.
Hm. This is interesting so far... Curious on where this might take us.
Hope you update soon!
I like where this is going.
MOAR!
I saw this picture on deviant art yesterday. Story seems interesting.
The white cliffs of Dover?
2537085 Now what on earth would give you that idea? *Grins* Yes, it's a reference to the White Cliffs of Dover. ^^ I've always though of Equestria as an extravagant Garden and Kent is described as the "Garden of England". the scene sort of makes itself :)
2537092 so are you gonna have nazis bombing the civilian houses?
those games are awesome!
Sorry been playing too much IL2 Sturmovic and Blazing Angels
Hey uhh.... Canterbury is an actual English town near the cliffs of Dover, yeah on the game IL2 Sturmovic you can choose to dogfight over it,
2537258 I'm aware Canterbury is a real city :) I studied my Bachelors degree at the university there ^^. Hence i mentioned Garden of England, Kent and the White Cliffs ^^ :P
2537300 and I have only just realised it exists
I hope this turns out as well as it starts.
This has potential.
So this is the awesome story to go with the cool picture
I think it would be worth a feature.
I look forward to more.
I'm especially keen to see the Flutterdash
i know someone who lives near canterbury, its a real place
2542390 I'm well aware it's a real place :) I lived there for three years when I did my University course.
There is also a Canterbury in New Zealand, Australia, Canada and US :P
Y'know I could never think of a ponified name for London....
So that's why the story has a sad tag!
In all seriousness, I think you meant to use sat.
Excellent chapter besides that, keep up the good work!
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Good catch! I may have been slightly sick when writing this (Used this as a means of "Doing something worthwhile" whilst delirious). Glad you liked the chapter :)
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Loindon? :P
2584576 Loindon?
Liondon sounds better coz there could be a country of Lions but Loindon?
2584624
The Loin is a part of a pony :P
2584715
I really didn't need that in my head.
Good chapter, by the way. I'm liking where this is going.
2584863 It's on their lower back :P So don't be scared of the word. It's not as indecent as it is on human anatomy.
2584715 uh... Looked it up in the dictionary and it's 'the region of the sexual organs'
2585470 In relation to Humans, yup. Look it up in relation to Equines :P
2585514 yeah it's The part of the body on both sides of the spine Between the lowest rib and the hipbone
soo.... Near the sexual organs
It is also a cut of meat
Loin
2585530
My thoughts exactly.
2588993>>2585530
In the end, just say it aloud and it sounds like a farmer pronouncing London :P Can't think of any better way to Ponify it :P
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Good point.
Did I mention I like the story? It may have gotten lost in the discussion.
2589136
You did :) I hope I continue to please
One of them what?
2741465 Fixed. Was an excerpt left in of something I deleted. Will go through it in a moment
2741536 The only mention of her being a Unicorn was :
Which is to imply the traits of a Unicorn, which Twilight has in abundance. I apologise if this was made vague.
That and to be honest I think her friends will for the most part continue to think of her as a Unicorn as that is what she has been for most of their friendship. I think she'll just be a "Unicorn with wings" in their minds ^^ But that's headcanon.
2741606 k whatever
Towards the end you wrote now instead of not. (Where Fluttershy's wings wouldn't open.)
Aside from this, I like the chapter. Let's see what happens next.
2744604 Thanks for spotting it :) Will fix it. Glad you liked the chapter! It's quite obvious I don't proof read this enough.
Just read it and loved it. Now that we're caught up, can't wait to see what happens next.
Like, like, like! This is exciting!
Hmmm... Time for Fluttershy to shine!
~Skeeter The Lurker
You'd better update quicker next time or flutters will get ye'
3067414 Will try my best! Sorry :)
3067562. Good now have this
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Reading your work is always enjoyable. I just love the way you go about describing things and giving information. You are a truly talented author.
3070148 Thank you very much! One of the things I find difficult with reading stories is that people tend to tell but don't show, so i make a big deal out of putting an amount of description in that I would be happy with :)
3067608
I don't know why, but it fits perfectly with the story.
3070275 is it the song?
3071427
Possibly. But it's perfect.