*Sarcasm mode on* I bet you'll never guess what the title is referencing...
All is not well in the land of Equestria. It doesn't take long for the rest of the mane 6 to find out why Rainbow Dash has been acting so strangely, but that's only the beginning of everypony's problems. Get ready for a tale of love and loss, random humanising, alien invasion... and an enigmatic brown unicorn who seems to know it all.
Rated Teen for action sequences, sexual references, and stuff that might be swearing if anyone could understand it.
Comments contain spoilers.
Chapters (17)
Interesting...
How can one drug wipe weeks of memories from somepony? And not even the whole memories, just one part (what he looked like) .
Other than that everybody seemed in character, and didn't catch on any errors (not that that means anything, I've never been good at picking up on those types of things
I'm planning on expanding on this a little more, in particular RD's memory loss. Thanks!
205442 Looking forward too it
Also, I'm failing to see the connection to Bohemian rhapsody toher than the lyrics at the start... will it come into play later?
Very likely. :D
I know where he's from: Equestria!
Dimension 33?
I assume he's created the Tardis? There's already the Sonic Screwdriver
Your welcome
That was the worst Melbourne accent I've ever heard! I DO NOT TALK LIKE THAT, NOR DO I KNOW ANYBODY WHO DOES
!!!!!!!!
Do you come from the land down under? Where women blow and men blunder? Can't you hear, can't you hear the thunder? You'd better run, you'd better take cover.
208888 It's fine, I forgive you...
BUT NEVER DO THAT ACCENT AGAIN.
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Interesting...
ALTERNATE UNIVERSES FTW
253834 I WAS having a rather bad day. Thank you!
*CLAP CLAP*
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TAKE ALL THE THUMBS UP THE INTERNET HAS
307857 I wasn't sure at first, but now I am: you officially rock.
308394 there was doubt?
311551 Well... no. But that is actually one of the most uplifting things anyone has ever said to me.
I'm thinking maybe I should add a comedy tag. What does everybrony else think?
325913
I comedy tag? You've got to be joking
BA-DUM TSH
C WAT I DID THAR?
But yeah, you should
Shawshank Redemption. I see what you did there
Once again, great chapter.
335246 Thank you so much! I was wondering if anyone would notice the reference. And another person's commenting!
Its scary, because drugs like that can, and do, actually exist.
Det Axsent
100 universe's........god knows how many versions of them.
352087 Yes, it's been established that there's 100 dimensions in the multiverse (this one, the real world, is no. 100) but here's the question:
How many multiverses are there?
Hmmm, quite, o'l chap we should probably continue this conversation somewhere else.
Sorry for not reading/commenting for awhile but...
At first I was like
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Then I was like
waht a 4.bp.blogspot.com/-xitvD4KCfwE/ToYn0nFNjLI/AAAAAAAABGs/lGI-tY4zPRg/s1600/Twist.jpg
then I was like
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then I was like
waht a troop1379.org/Junior/macrame/Twist3.gif
then I was like
waht a farm4.static.flickr.com/3486/3808136616_a762d304a3.jpg
then I was like
waht a mylittlepony.neoseeker.com/w/i/mylittlepony/b/b1/Twist.png
AND THEN I FOUND A PICTURE OF TWIST TWISTING
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The point I'm trying to get across is that there was a twist
THEN I WAS LIKE
BABY BABY BABY
OH
LIKE
BABY BABY BABY
OH
LIKE
BABY
BABY
BABY
OH
THOUGHT YOU'D ALWAYS BE MINE
MINE
364086 So... you found the twist?
SIX MONTHS?
Wouldn't rainbow dash had given birth? What did she do with Soarin'?
These questions, and many more, will be answered in the next chapter of...
Equestrian Rhapsody
368412 Actually, the equine gestation period is 11 months, and since she was 4 1/2 months pregnant when Hex and Twilight disappeared... you can work it out for yourself.
Psst. New chapter!
Please, Hex couldn't have died!
Please.
416333 Have you ever played Half-Life? If you had, then you'll know what had happened to him.
But thanks for letting me know what you thought. I too was extremely sad.
419073
The original Half-Life?
Na, I'm about quarter of a way through.
Finally got around to reading this, I've been procrastinating, in fact, I'm procrastinating right now, meant to be doing a critical review on Hitch-hikers guide. STOP REMINDING ME OF IT.
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DUN DUN DUUUUUUUN
why is url not working
any way
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The ending made me happier than I was in the middle, so not deppressed
Rape? Really?
Don't worry, your not the one to go the most Adult out of nowhere
I hate ECIS for what happened in that
perfectly good detective fic
I said I hope there's no unnessisary shipping and joked that there should be AppleDash because RD was the one that died, then I said please tell me there isn't any
He said there wasn't
Spike gets decapitated and AJ just want to have sex with twilight
Pinkie pie gets kiddnaped and Gilda starts to rape her (doesn't get to far because:)
RD comes in
Then there was a brain fuck and it was RD behind the whole thing
Then it turns out the main detective is in a relation ship with his partner
first time I've every seen m/m shipping/implied sex (thank god it was implied)
AJ gets kidnapped
then he wrote a chapter which was AJ/RD/Big Mac Sex.
I don't even know when big mac came (NO FUCKING PUN INTENDED [PUN INTENDED])
I skimmed through and saw something about blood.
The last paragraph was about AJ peeing on/in the other 2.
It started out as a teen rating, after the last chapter I mention I told him to change it to adult which he did
It's just this fic is a happy/adventure fic, not a sad/grimdark/torture fic. Please make it more happy in the sequal (I'll get to that later... don't know why it's a sequel)
DON'T EVER WRITE A CLOP CHAPTER
430112 If I ever write about that kind of stuff, it will either be implied or offscreen, so rest assured that a clop chapter is highly unlikely if not impossible. I never said it would be "happy" and didn't I say that the dark tag would come into effect? Don't worry, it's all character development for the sake of storytelling, okay?
have either of you guys played hl2 ep 2?
he's Gordon flippin Freeman!
and that alone makes this story EPIC
I FUCKING GOT THE SONG BITCH!!! NOW WHY DIDN'T I POST THE COMMENT!!!
Actually I know why I didn't post it, I knew this chapter was up and couldn't be bothered
BUT I KNEW IT!!!!
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Also, so Twilight lives you Tongue Tied?
That was a great song. Did you here Red Dwarf is coming back?
sorry for picture reuse but
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sorry for picture reuse
but getting in the credits to this/any story
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Time to go read the sequal
I have HL&HL2 but haven't completed either because every time I do I get a head ache, (it's the only game I get it with).
I knew the ending though and the gameplay so I'll keep reading
433704 Thank you. Have some smiles.
I actually saw a comic about that photo being shopped.
It ended in the obvious "The cake is a lie joke" who applebloom (or sweetie belle, can't remember) saw coming and said that feather wait had better not say it.
but he did.
A Barnyard reference? Wow.
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MOTHER FUCKING COOL STORY BRO! YEAH!
I read the first chapter! I LOVE it!
I;ll upload a pic of Winter Pony on dev art :3
I loved it and all the little things like Valve and the Twilight Saga stuff... made it complete
I loved it! Onto the next one now!!!
1039662 Word of warning: chapters 12 through 14 are what earned this story the dark tag.
I loved it! So many doctor who references in this one! It was awesome sauce! I cant wait to read the next!
Is this the real life?
Is this just fantasy?
Caught in a landslide
No escape from reality
Open your eyes
Look up to the skies and see...
Bohemian Rhapsody, Queen. The first few lines and i'm in love already
ya mean look at your hooves