The Mysterious Relationship Between Ditzy and Daring

What happens when Rainbow Dash's favorite book character is a real pony? What about when Ditzy Doo doesn't want to talk to Rainbow about it?

Dash decides there is only one thing she can do: Investigate.

And she promises its not really stalking.

Cover art drawn by me

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HJSDGCE

HJSDGCE #1 · May 13th, 2013 · · · The Mystery ·

Nice writing.
The idea is quite common (even though a lot of people still don't really follow it).
The part with the three laughing mares was something I focused the most.
It weird to hear them say

"What are you going to do about it? You can't even get her help," the mare pointed at Ditzy, "She'll probably just end up hurting you!"

and then laughed afterwards.
Jerks.
Also, the last DaringXDitzy fic I read made them sisters, in which Daring acts nothing like the book (more of a jerk).
I'd like to see what she acts like in this one.
I give you my moustache.

RainbowFlash96

RainbowFlash96 #2 · May 13th, 2013 · · · The Mystery ·

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Thanks for the comment!
I'm glad you brought that up because I really have never seen a DitzyXDaring Fic. I'll try and find one, that paring actually interests me.

About the laughing, I think I might want to fix that. They were suppose to be like making fun of her eyes, but I don't think I did a good job on that.

Thanks again for the positive feedback!

HeartsWarmth

HeartsWarmth #3 · May 14th, 2013 · · · The Mystery ·

I encourage you to write more but regardless thank you for writing what you have so far I enjoyed it.

RainbowFlash96

RainbowFlash96 #4 · May 15th, 2013 · · · The Mystery ·

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Yeah I'm writing really slowly, sorry about that. As the school year is wrapping up there is so much I have to do, and with golf I get home at like 8:30 every night. Then homework, but I still have time to write excuses like this one Between the three stories I'm working on I have a system, so don't fret there is more.