Celestia and Discord tells Spike something shocking! They are his parents?! But how? What? this doesn't make any sense! This is very shocking to the young dragon.
Read as Discord and Celestia tell the story of how they got together, how they had Spike and how discord came to be.
Hmm this intrigues me, I wish to read more..
As cool as this is you REALLY need like a proofreader or something
I've been asked by a few people to help them out on that regard, and I'd be more than willing to help you out as well.
Just an offer
As for the story:
It's interesting I guess...never thought of Celestia and Discord having a kid...or even Discord being a full on dragon back in the day.
Also..you just brought up my favorite song from Kingdom Hearts that earns you 10,000 respect points from me (redeemable for one free jack shit)
2544906 Thanks, you can be my proof reader if you want. and you really like it! THANKS!!!
2544917 I shan't disappoint! I shall get to work immediately.
(Because I have nothing to do)
2544922 Okie Dokie Lokie!
Nope nope nope nope
2545194
It is sad day
hmm... interesting
when i got to the big reveal, i had Gutsman's ass music start playing in my head felt oddly appropriate
i look forward to reading more
Im sorry... but instant fave and this is one of those stories I wish i could up-vote more than once.
Discord and Cele had ... Spike...? mind blown please write more on this story soon.
good story but, dear good, take a second read for the grammar, I almost bleed a couple of times, specially with so many "an" errors
At first I was at
Then when I was reading it I was like
Now I'm give me more!
Ps..you my good sir just overloaded my brain.
Interesting.
2545204 drama queen
I might do one here too....
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2606319 Really? It'll be cool if you did "Mare of the Waterfall"
2606330. Sure, just let me read it.
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2606350 Okie Dokie Lokie
interbubbling i want to see more kuddos on the idea
More please....
(Manly tears will be shed )
2644099 I will, I just have to do Mare of the waterfall first. Then this story will have a second chapter. I promise
When I saw the summery I was confused. But gave it a chance and now I want more. Instant fav
It's an interesting idea. You need to proofread for grammar, and I feel your work would improve if you spent more time describing the situation, like facial expressions in response, and especially, if they are going to be doing "wacky adventures", say what they were doing, at the very least.
I ...don't get it....Why is this submitted in the DISCOLIGHT group?
Yet I'm still curious enough to read it....okay...
I'm shocked to the core!
Mmkay. So. That just happened. Why didn't Twi ask why she was there? If this is purely about Spike why did she need to come too? Aside from that, I love it. Write moar?
I like this story. I plan to do a story about Tia and Dis being Spike maker's myself.
i really like this story hope to read more soon
i know i commented on this chapter before and i am sorry to bug you i was just wondering if by any chance you know when you might post next chapter i understand that life can get in the way and i don't want to rash you or anything i just asking if you don't know that is okay and take your time on making a grate chapter
Please continue. I can't wait to see were this goes.
Please continue. Ican't wait to see were this goes.
Does anybody want to adopt this story?
5787070 Not to be rude, but why is this in the Twicord group?
5837331 That's what I wanna know.
5837339 Huh. Can other people even submit stories that aren't theirs into groups?
I dunno.
sorry bug you again but I was wondering if you are going to update this story soon
sorry for bugging you yet again but do you know when the next chapter will be out?
5 years later and still nothing
Is screwball, illusion and pandora gonna show up
Bro predicted Kirins!!