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Ask Ribston the Treasure Hunter

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After Discord was banished once again by the new heroins of harmony, the Guard noticed that lots of artifacts were stolen from the castle. The heroins of harmony were too busy with their researches on the magic of Friendship, and the Princesses had no other choice than founding the RTHA, the Royal Treasure Hunters Agency. Our story begins with one of them, a unicorn called Ribston Pippin...

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Thaums

Thaums #1 · May 20th, 2013 · · ·

Heres a hint: Don't use pony creator cover art, Just don't.

RibstonGrowBack

RibstonGrowBack #2 · May 20th, 2013 · · ·

2604739 Got it.

RibstonGrowBack

RibstonGrowBack #3 · May 20th, 2013 · · ·

2604739 The thing is I don't have anything else. And if you could comment the actual story that would be great

Peppermint

Peppermint #4 · May 20th, 2013 · · ·

OH FOR THE LOVE OF.
Right when I thought there would be no more Walls-Of-Text.
YOU post THIS.
Fix it.

As for the story, Can't read it because of the big 'Ol Wall-Of-Text in the way.
Spelling errors dotted here and there.

It's a new... concept I'm triying here, as it actually is an Askblog. I'll post here the story posts only, but if you're interested in asking, the blog's here.
I'll upload the story here only when a full chapter is done, not post after post.
That's also why the chapters will be short, to keep the "askblog" kind of process.

Im almost certain that this could have gone into the authors notes section, NOT the description.

In all, Needs work, lots of it.
Also, Get a Pre-reader, they'll save your life

RibstonGrowBack

RibstonGrowBack #5 · May 21st, 2013 · 1 · ·

2605823 Yay, an actual comment

For the good ol' wall O text thingey, well, I'm reading books, and that's how the books layouts are. If it doesn't suit people, well, that's a shame, but I won't change it.

For the spelling errors, I'm french, so that's normal if I make mistakes. I'll check that again.

For the author's note thingey, I'll do that, thanks for the hint.