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Buried Treasures (Stories that Deserve More Attention)690 stories ·594 members

A Message from Princess Twilight

After being presented as Equestria's newest Princess, Twilight Sparkle is asked by Princess Celestia what she is planning on doing now. Looking back on how she became an alicorn, Twilight decides there's something she wants to share with the ponies around her.

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Fire Cracker

Fire Cracker #1 · May 3rd, 2013 · · ·

Although that ending was just what i was expecting to happen i still got a laugh out of it.

meerkat8472

meerkat8472 #2 · May 3rd, 2013 · · ·

Awww, that's so sad, all that good work ruined by poor delivery. It's sad to think that the book would probably have been a huge success if they sold it in bookstores instead of trying to give it away.

Kiue Jin

Kiue Jin #3 · May 3rd, 2013 · · ·

I could see the follow up chapter of this in which the followers of each different princess argues over who is the best princess.

RK_Striker_JK_5

RK_Striker_JK_5 #4 · May 3rd, 2013 · · ·

Not too shabby for a first go-around.

Swashbucklist

Swashbucklist #5 · May 4th, 2013 · · ·

If you can't even give it away, there's something wrong with it. Good punchline, toe-stepping aside.

The biggest problem I had was that you used the words "hooves" and "girls" an awful lot, which doesn't help clarify that Spike was there. He's her closest friend, number one assistant, and he wrote some of those reports, so he'd darn well better have been.