With Hearts and Hooves Day fast approaching, Dinky Hooves is concerned over her lonesome mother finding a pony to take her out. With a little list in tow, the filly sets out about town, trying to find a Mr. Right for Derpy.
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Nice little story, not very elaborate or anything, but still made me smile a bit.
I could not stop smiling, I want to hear a story about the date.
I absolutely laughed at the conversation with Rainbow Dash. You can't really get mad at a foal when they're not really sure what they're talking about. Actually, I think that Rainbow is more worried that her rumoured sexual preference is town gossip fodder! She needs to talk to Rarity about if she knows why ponies have started saying those things!
I love the thought that Big Mac is permanently traumatised by the Crusaders' attempt to 'help' him with his love-life. If those kids ever do get their Cutie Marks, it will probably be something about causing disasters!
Interesting fact: Derpy/Time Turner may be semi-canonical. In the closing parade in 'Magical Mystery Cure', Dinky was standing in between Derpy and Time Turner with Amethyst Star ('Sparkler') to his other side. There was just enough distance between them to raise questions about whether they were together as a group or just standing next to each other. The Powers That Be love trolling us, don't they?
It's destiny!
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I might do an actual sequel about the date somewhere down the line.
2557773. PERFECTNESS
I love it! I won't post any spoilers here, but I love the humorous parts, I love the ending, I love how Derpy isn't some mentally retarded pony but she's just a klutz. I love Random Redneck's take on Derpy & Dinky's relationship (as well as how they are connected). I just love this entire fanfic from beginning to end.
10/10, would read again.
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Wow.....Dinky seemed like a little bit of a bitch in this, that's new
To bad Dash turned Derpy down, would love to see such a pairing again. I'm honestly not surprised this turned into a Derpy/Doctor fic but hey, to each their own. You did well on this, not bad, not bad at all and what's wrong with Pipsqueak? I love that little guy.
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I just don't like Pipsqueak. I find him annoying. And now that you mention it, a DashxDerpy fic does sound fun...I think I know what I'm writing next.
I deem this fic to be win and lulz. *nods*