• Member Since 19th Aug, 2011
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solsticebrony888


20 year old musician from Vegas that enjoyed writing about colorful equines.

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(Story takes place during the events in AppleShy: The Series, Which isn't required to read this story)

Rainbow Dash never saw it coming. She was content with everything in her life! Being with Soarin was like living a dream come true, and everything seemed to be going fine! However, when she and her friends attend a party at Sugarcube Corner, she meets a certain somepony who changes everything for her. In the end, how will the events of just one night, change her whole life?

Chapters (7)
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Comments ( 72 )

This is... interesting. Though shipping is more amusing than alluring for me, this chapter isn't bad at all. It'll be interesting to see how this story goes.

Some minor things, structuring could use a little work. A couple of grammar errors in the mix, but it can be overlooked.

All in all, this looks good, and I'm looking forward to later installments :ajsmug:

I liked it and I'm interested how it will continue :pinkiehappy:

6188 Thanks for the tips! I haven't had time too do a full comb-over of the grammar yet...I currently have no wifi here I live, and when I do, I don't have the time to. The offline program I've been using to write with has no spell-check. When I get wifi in my villa, I'll do my best. Thanks :pinkiehappy:

I can't wait to see what Rainbow Dash does next!

7460
Hopefully, comes clean and has a serious talk with Soarin - and Scratch - in short order. This can all still work out for the little fraulein!

MOAR, for the love of god moar!! :flutterrage:

rainbow dash x soarin forever!

*spoiler alert*

soarin isn't working he's cheating.

7782 At one point in time, I actually considered that. But the idea that somepony in the Wonderbolts would do something as low as cheating seems off-putting to me. hehe

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

Oh sweet Celestia, Dash, please be honest with Soarin and Vinyl about what's going on. Please. Who knows, maybe if you do you can actually work things out with both of them. Don't burn both your bridges with all of this. :applecry:

This is awesome. I want more. Dear mister writer person, make more for the love of :trollestia:, more!

As long as it has a happy ending :pinkiesad2:

actually that is your decision but i'd prefer to see a happy ending :rainbowkiss:

Who could make fun of those ruby red orbs... :pinkiecrazy:

YAA! Brilliant! rainbow didn't mess up... yet... Love your style of writing.

7625
Im right there with ya dude!!

This is really good so far! Even though im ALL for SoarinxDash, it's still awesome!:rainbowkiss: keep it up man!

the story could end right here, but i see it still has the "unfinished" thingy. i wonder how Vinyl Scratch will react to all this :rainbowderp:

9324 That's why it's incomplete. I decided to go the route where I explained that Rainbow Dash only had fleeting feelings for Vinyl Scratch, I have still yet to decide on how she confronts her, so she hasn't been "heartless" yes. I'm using the comments I receive right now to fix a proper ending to the story. Thank you :pinkiehappy:

9323 I don't even know for sure what I'm going to go with. The story has the "unfinished" feeling because chapter 6 I was only able to have a lot about Rainbow Dash. I still need to decide what I'm going to do with Vinyl Scratch, but keep an eye out, because I have no wifi for next few days and just my laptop, so WATCH OUT hehe:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Yes finally a new part! Can't be the last one though, because something must be done about vinyl scratch...

Still loving it!

I love how this story keeps pulling me back and forth! I want Rainbow to stay with Soarin'... no I want her to be with Scratch... and now I want her back with Soarin' again!

Chapter 6 is now unpublished for the time being, redoing chapter 6 and 7 completely. Prepare :D

i liked the other version more

17158 Sorry to hear that, but I didn't... :fluttershysad:

idk, i thought the other one was better

21768 jeez now I just want to delete this story :/

That moment when you put your heart and soul into the last two chapters for 2 full weeks and people say they like the old half-assed version better. Brb, dying a little on the inside.....:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

Well I can safely say that this is one of the best fanfics I've read in a long time

I tip my metophorical hat to you sir :twilightsmile:

21800 Dude, this was awesome, I loved it. This story is one of my favorite fics and I think you've done a magnificent job! It's so well written and stirs just the right emotions. 5 Stars to you sir :pinkiehappy: I really hope you carry this on, seriously dude, i'd love you for ever. I need to know how this ends more than I need my insulin (Literally, i'm T1 diabetic) Peace out bro :twilightsmile:

Now, now, don't do that! You can't please everypony all the time!

One thing I will comment on though; you missed your closing italics tag up there mid-way through Scratch spotting Rainbow.

Don't listen to the negative nancys, I for one loved it. And like all fan fics I love, I would want them to continue. I'm just a greedy bastard like that :ajbemused:

Well, wasn't expecting those good responses!:pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::rainbowkiss: you guys don't even know how relieving that is...Thank you very much :D
21807 Thank you very much :D
21828 Though the story is complete, I will always add little updates in the AppleShy series, because they're so intertwined :D
21866 Don't worry, eventually I will write some sort of update-story with just Vinyl Scratch and Dash, it'll be like the AppleShy series but different because they're two completely different ponies in contrast to Applejack and Fluttershy. Keep on the look out :D
Thanks everypony :D

21800 I love the new version... I like it better than the old one, it is very cute :) I hope you don't delete it. :fluttercry:

22265 You have nothing to worry about, I was just bothered by negative responses after all the work I put into this story :D

I don't recall seeing an old version but I've grown to like this story as well as your other stories.

Only thing I can think of saying to possibly improve this chapter would be to fix the Italics that seem to take control of the last third or so of the chapter. Other than that it's great.

Pore Vinyl !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THis is really good! I wish I found this sooner!!! Great work!!!

:twilightblush::rainbowkiss:

I love this story! its fantastic , its got all a fan can want, Funny sad romantic! you name it! the only thing I do not like is that there is no more for me to read! you age doing a great job and you should be proud. thank you for writing this!!

Not get to work! as Pinkie said Time is candy!



:twilightblush::rainbowkiss:

24451 I will eventually have a follow-up story to this one, maybe another story with Rainbow Dash (Not necessarily another ship, but still have Vinyl Scratch in it) Thanks for your kind words, brony! ::pinkiesmile::heart:

Excellent story. I loved the interaction between Dash and Scratch. This must be the hardest feat she's ever had to accomplish. :rainbowdetermined2:

I especially loved how Pinkie added to the scene instead of distracting from it. Even her sudden appearance furthered more interaction. "And then I was all like :pinkiegasp: and I could tell they both had a major case of the fuzzie-wuzzies!"

Classic Pinkie Pie, brony! *brohoof*

I'm so used to Vinyl being with octy this is going to be hard to wrap my head around:ajbemused:

39049 Well hopefully if you read the rest of my story that it helps you wrap your head around the pairing :)

great story, though I'm a little late commenting on it(i read it back when you finished it on the 8th).

its a nice story :)
LETS HAVE A PARTY!!!! :pinkiehappy:

I really love this story it is one of the best fan fic i have ever read thanks for making such a lovely series :heart: and side story and also im just wondering are you maybe thinking of making a sequel to this or just let out imagination run wild
sorry if this has any grammar errors or anything it's 1am and i cant see my key board

83077 Thank you so much :) I'm really glad you think so! :pinkiehappy: In the next Appleshy, there will be a slight update to Rainbow and Vinyl's relationship, possibly a whole chapter dedicated to an update on Vinyl and Dashie. Due to the two other stories I'm working on that are unrelated to Appleshy/A Heart For 2, it may take a me a little to do a good amount of work in Appleshy 7, though I have started on it. Thanks again for the kind words :twilightsmile:

Finaly got some time to read some more of your awesome storys and it seems this one proofes to be as awesome as your Appleshy series. ^^
realy liked the first chapter and I'm happy that worked her dropping feelings for Soarin into it, you dont see that in many fanfictions

PS: I think you have a little typo in there:
"He frowned when she saw the dissapointed look on Rainbow Dash’s face... "
shouldnt that be:
"He frowned when he saw the dissapointed look on Rainbow Dash’s face... "
(or did he have a gender reassigment mid-sentence? xD)

142789 Thanks! As will all my non-Appleshy related stories, I try to do something way different than in most shipfics (Since I only write romance fics). I hate Cliche stories! Haha. I'm glad you like it so far <iframe src='http://www.deviantart.com/download/210776562/instant_macintosh__flash__by_ganton3-d3hho8i.swf' frameborder='0' scrolling='no' width='155' height='120'></iframe>

I'll fix the mistake right now, thanks for notifying me. Enjoy the rest of the story! :twilightsmile:

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