This is a the story of the young pony Midnight Rose, aspiring DJ and Artist working her way through the University of Gifted Equines in Canterlot. During the day she was just a regular old pony from Ponyville, free spirited, laid back and very brave. When party time came however, She was known as DJ NyteLyfe. Few ponies could get a party started quick like her, except maybe Pinkie Pie or Vinyl Scratch aka DJ Pon3 whom of course were both good friends with her. Midnight always seemed to feel more alive, more energetic at night, especially one as amazing as this. We begin our story as Midnight Rose basks in the beauty for Princess Luna’s brilliant night sky.
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So, here's a quick list of positives and negatives
Negatives:
-I know it's only a short story, but the story isn't very captivating, it's about as bland as a grocery list, sorry.
-Never use Ponymaker for cover art. Ever.
Positives
-Descriptive and well written
-Good gtammar
Overall, if you touched up on some flaws like the cover art and made a more intriguing story with Midnight, people might get interested, overall this gets a "meh"
That's a nice story, but it feels... incomplete. I'd like to see more of the adventures of theses three ponies, if you would be so kind.
2514046 Not my best work I'll admit. I do plan on making more with these 3 as inspiration hits me.
2513265 I appreciate the feed back, Its been so long since I've written anything so as you can see I'm a bit.... rusty i suppose? Hopefully I'll get better with this stuff as time goes on and be able to organize my thoughts better with this stuff.
2513265 And as for the cover art, well I didn't know what else to really put as this is my very first time posting on this site. I'll try to find something better next time or change this if I can.