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This has promise. There were a couple of typos, and the sentence structure could have been better, but it wasn't too bad. I shall read on.
A like and a fav from me.
Damn, this whole story and ending was just gory and beautiful at the same time.
Favourite and follow, great story!
It was a nice chapter,but as an advice:stop using the word"Twilight"so much,especially at the beginning of the sentence.Change it with"she"or"her",instead of repeating her name so much.
Poor Twilight.
Couldn't they have at least considered that she was being controlled? That she never meant to do this?