The most malevolent son of Gallifrey gets a second chance, well, alright it is probably his 10 thousandth chance, but better late than never.
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Sorry the chapters are so short, I just do not feel comfortable packing lots of content in a single chapter. It makes me feel rushed, and if I feel rushed, the quality of the story will probably take a nose dive. So, again, I am sorry
Also, the Master looks human in the cover image, but he is not and never was, so unless the story takes a highly unexpected twist I am not adding the human tag.
I'm not sure to give a slow mocking clap, or a fast enthusiastic one.
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Do both. It is always more fun when people express mixed opinions.
This is the longest chapter so far. And where our displaced time lord starts becoming a hero. In short, the action is finally starting.
The Master is starting to become like the Doctor. I like very much!
Thank you. In some aspects, that is what I am aiming for. Also, thanks for the feedback. You are only the second person, not including me, to actually comment.
If anypony sees grammatical errors, let me know. Proofreading is my weakest skill. Please help!
I have no idea why no one likes this!I mean when i'm commenting now,the likes and dislikes are tied.
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What I want to know, is why so few people have liked or disliked.
5 likes
5 dislikes
151 views
Why have only ten liked or disliked it?
I doubt those 10 did all 151 views.
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Wow.I dident even look at the vews.But neither liking or disliking probobly means the person is conflicted.
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Does internal conflict mean that I inadvertently trolled them?
Because that would be both awesome and disturbing.
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Possibly?
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Great! Uncertainty is always exciting.
Anyway, what do you think of the story so far? Likes? Dislikes? Questions?
I will answer any question that does not involve spoilers.
I have the basic storyline planned out, but not all the details and somepony's opinion might provide inspiration for me.
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well..
Love the story,
and I want to know,Is your avvie the master pony in this story?
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Yes, he is. if you know someone who could get the correct cutie mark for me, I would appreciate it. I cannot produce a decent picture to save my life. And thanks, for praising my story.
For those of you who might not be Doctor Who fans, this is the scene my prologue starts from. It is much too impressive for my writing to do it justice. Anypony not already a fan of Doctor Who, I highly recommend it. It is epic
I chose the perfect time to forget the shadow piranha name.
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You were unsure before. Thanks for converting to enjoying the story. And do not worry, it is not like satellite 5. Where the weakest link gets hit by an energy beam from a deceptively civil robot. I promise.
Oh loverly! I was wondering when the Master would meet the Doctor. This is wonderful! Keep it up.
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You want a cutie mark? No prob. I'm not an artist, but I find I'm good at manipulating/combining images, and this one is definitely a combination.
Here's what I put together for ya:
imgur.com/UrLEPMc.png
Hope you like it!
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Thanks! I am grateful for your approval. This story just would not feel right if those two never became friends again. Excellent cutie mark. I really appreciate it.
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No prob. It only took me 5 min to make it since it was all stuff I could just copy-paste and recolor/resize. I'm glad you like it!
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Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Not having the right cutie mark was tearing me up inside
Like being incomplete....
It is bad that I identify with a reformed Super Villain.
2519341
Not at all, especially when your writing a fanfic about said reformed supervillian.
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I am sorry, but this is the first story I have ever written that was not complete nonsense . Is identifying with my characters normal when writing a good story?
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There's nothing out of the ordinary with that as far as I know.
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Thank you.
Oh, do you have any questions about the story?
No spoilers, but I will answer anything else about it.
I BUCKING LOVE THIS!!! yep i went native....deal with it! all kidding aside this is a great fucking story. cant wait for more.
because random emotes.
the name would be vasha nerada i think.
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You missed a letter in the first word, but yes. Congratulations.
also, Thanks for your praise
:rainbowcool: this Is AWWEEESSOOOMMMEE
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Thank you!
nice. The master is a hero even in his sleep!
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He is an even bigger hero in his sleep. Converting the goddess of nightmares to the side of good, within her own realm, through overwhelming power. That is magnificent.
Even by his standards.
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Well considering that 19 years ago he didn't have standards that's quite an improvement.
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Eeyup
I would topple great empires to be able to write like this.
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Thanks.
Woohoo, got past the ten chapter mark!
Pinkie Party
lolz. now the Master has been introduced to the impossibilities of Pinkie Pie.
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And they are gonna be best friends. Whether he wants to or not. I am not saying he does not want to, just that pinkie will not stand for any other outcome.
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I can't wait until he meets Twi again. I think they'd make a great couple.
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True, after He is done giving her a stern lecture about jumping to conclusions, and running away from her problems.
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If you're worried about quality, I could proof-read and edit this for you.
You remind me of myself when I first started writing on the Internet, to a degree.
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That would be most appreciated. Proof-reading is easily my weakest skill.
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Alright then. Stick em on Google Docs and PM me the password and I'll set about editing and proof reading it. I'll also do all the chapters that you've already written.
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Okay, I find myself in the embarrassing position of having no idea how to use google docs
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Ok...
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There's a easier solution- register at Fanfiction.org, copy all the text you want me to edit into a DocX document, send that document to me. (My account name is the same.)
I'll edit it, send it back and then you copy and paste it back over here. I've done it with my own stories, the only irritating bit is the copy and pasting.
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Sounds good. Thanks