Rainbow Dash loves naps, but when she decides to take one in the middle of a storm she gets sick. Will the usually athletic pegasus be able to slow down and get the rest she needs to get better? And what do the Cutie Mark Crusaders have in store for Ponyville's self proclaimed "coolest pony"?
When I started writing this it was meant as a random comedy but so far it feels more slice of life. Loosely based around the events of the episode "Suited for Success".
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Oh god.... this can't end well
Oh no! Cutie Doctors! Can't wait for more
This seems just plain adorable.
I can't wait for the next installment.
This is looking to be very good.
But what will the Rarity and Applejack do when they find out that Applebloom, Sweetie Bell, and Scootaloo effectively kidnapped Rainbow Dash? I am SO looking forward to that
Wow, This story is great. your characterization and dialogue is excellent and the Cutie Mark Crusaders are hilarious ("She's refusing treatment! Get a rope!"
). Also, loving the Big Mac screen time and his big brotherly advice, what a sweetheart 
. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Well done.
You've got an excellent start to a story! I'm worried about Rainbow Dash's health!
...and I admire how you made an explanation for why Rainbow Dash only said, "Make it about 20% cooler."
Dr Scootaloo almost has the right bedside manner for a doctor.
*hee!*
A very funny -- though a touch frightening -- episode.
If you don't get well... we'll send the Cutie Mark Crusaders to your place to make you well!
And I adore your characterizations!
First, an awesome conclusion to a fun story!
Second, here's some spelling corrections:
distroying -> destroying (several times)
celing -> ceiling (several times)
sumersulting -> somersaulting
electicity -> electricity
impotant -> important
nonchlantly -> nonchalantly
poines -> ponies
juinor -> junior
vollenteer -> volunteer
sentance -> sentence
temperary -> temporary
clounds -> clouds
dissapointed -> disappointed
Keep on writing!
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Oh my gosh those are embarrassing... Thank you so much for pointing them out, I think I was able to change all of them.
Thats what I get for posting a story without spell checking it first >.<
This is The. Worst. Possible. Thing!
loves it :D its SO AWESOME!!!!
This was a very good read.
OH NO! Rainbow Dash I wish I knew you.
Rainbow Dash lives! HOORAY!
For now at least.
What just happened?
Good thing no one died. Great story.
